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This story is a sequel to Break Your Heart


Princess Luna has taken an interest in Twilight Sparkle; the young Unicorn is beautiful, brilliant, and immensely talented and powerful. Wanting to try her hoof at courtship again, Luna takes a month's vacation from her duties as co-ruler of Equestria to stay in Ponyville and date Twilight.

The cover art was provided by my wonderful and talented friend, PastelDemon.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 36 )

:pinkiegasp: Oh my god yes! Oh how Twilight will react to this! :twilightsheepish:

Aw man.... Why does it have to be princest? I'm still gonna read it tho.

Ummmmmmmm Twiluna OK, but Lunestia, as well.... Oooooookaaaaay then.

Aw man.... Why does it have to be princest?

Yeah, I don't understand. I don't think that's a real English sentence. What are you trying to say? :rainbowderp::rainbowhuh:

7166001 He's referring to the Celestia/Luna pairing, I believe.

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Uh, yeah. I think maybe I had my deadpan set a little too high. I was going for 'The obvious reading is so unimaginably ridiculous that it must instead be a horrible typo.' #explainingthejokeruinsthejoke

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If the reason isn't some combination of Celestia/Cadance/Luna in a romantic relationship, this does not belong in the Princest group.

7166001
It's a made up word for "princess incest" :rainbowlaugh:


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I'm a girl, but yep, that's what I was referring to.

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:facehoof: Yeah, I... *sighs* I... Ok, thanks.

7166900 There are so many more, some are Twiluna and Twilestia but no incest at all.

As Pinkie dramatically gasped, the other girls stared astonishedly at Twilight. After a few moments, Rainbow said, "You're kidding, right?"

"Are you kidding?!" Pinkie shouted. "You're not sure that you're going to go on a date with Princess Luna?!"

"The Very Important Pony room for the Princess and her companion, Miss Twilight Sparkle,"

oh the VIP room thats nice.

As much as I find Luna bland as fuck in this so far, I did really enjoyed Twilight's "WTF is going on" reaction to Luna's... non-existing flirting?

7264737 You found her bland? That's just a tad discouraging. :applejackunsure: I was going for more of a "courted-so-many-thousands-of-other-ponies-in-thousands-of-years-that-her-date-requests-are-extremely-rehearsed" sort of vibe. Oh well... :ajbemused:

7265289 well, it got better, but from the first 2 chapters I honestly found her to be way too bland. but i suppose that could be the result of having lived for such a long time.

Hmm, curious to see where this goes. One could argue the scenes go by rather too quickly, but personally I enjoy being able to progress quickly through the narrative, especially since it's not bogged down in drama... at least not yet....

Also hoping to hear more about whom else Twilight had feelings for after Celestia... I feel like her train of thought mentions Rarity just a little too often to be coincidence.....:trollestia:

Is the opera a reference to anything in particular or did you come up with it?

7336854 The opera's sort of a hybrid between The Raven and The Tell-Tale Heart by Edgar Allan Poe and Sweeney Todd.

How much did the cover art cost you?

I :rainbowderp: okay then... that answers that question....

Full disclosure, I'm not big on incest in general, but these particular pairings are an occasional weakness of mine, largely because I don't look them up much. And Twilight and Cadance? If something happened to Shining I would totally ship them.:pinkiehappy: (Of course, I think the same about Shining and Rarity if something happened to Cadance, but that's neither here nor there.)

At least Twilight and Luna are still happy together.

7346718 Nothing; my friend made it for me.

7347073 I'll do a RariTwi fic eventually; don't worry. :twilightsmile: I'm glad you seemed to enjoy this fic, though! (P.S., Princess Bride FTW :pinkiehappy:)

...and I just noticed the Complete tag.:rainbowderp:

*dances on hooves* oooooo i want more of this story so much!! please oh please oh please make more

7265289 Yeah comes off more as robotic or I-couldn't-care-less-whether-or-not-you-accept-if-I-tried.

Plus you're wrong to think she's

courted-so-many-thousands-of-other-ponies-in-thousands-of-years

She was on the moon for one thousand years, before that I'm pretty sure she hadn't been around for much more than 200-500 years. It's a lot of years but she was still more of a loner than that.

After all, it's perfectly possible to fall in love more than once."
Twilight made a small smile. "I know. I... already have..."

WHOOOOOOOOOOO!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I NEEDZ TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I mean, uh.. I-if that's... you know, okay with you...

"Well, then you're going to love this place," Twilight said. "Their food is amazing . It probably helps that they carefully hand-pick everything they use."

You said hand-pick, don't you mean hoof-pick?

10148275 You're right, I'll fix that.

she exited the library and trotted to Frappe's Cafe. She'd agreed to see her friends for lunch there; perhaps they could help her decide what to do.

It's early morning, and she's literally just gotten up from the breakfast table ... . Careful Twi, somepony's messing with the flow of time.

Well the entire incest bit caught me off guard, that was.... unexpected.


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I'm gonna guess the reason being there immortals and so dating mortals would leave them heartbroken when that mortal dies. Unless the reason is something to do with Allicorns, I did read 1 story in the past where Luna and Celestia used to be in a relationship together because of some Allicorn thing where Allicorn sisters love each other romantically and Allicorn brothers kill each other until the other is dead or they both are dead. Weird concept and probably one of the weirdest concepts I came across on this site.

I would feel more comfortable if Twilight was an Allicorn or there were hints of Twilight becoming an Allicorn but nope.

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