Not sure if a dark tag is needed because of this chapter. It was quite brutal to be honest.

6826273 yeah i know im kinda debating it with myself; the first draft would have required the gore tag... which isnt the durection i was planning but how it had flowed.

Ill just add it to be certain, i get the feeling this isnt the last chapter like this... even though ut wint be the main focus.

i'm enjoying this so far. I feel like this chapter would been better if it ended right before you know shoes up to save the day, then for the next one expand on what happened while they were recovering then end on what the lose of the wings mean. but then again i love cliffhangers

6828258 yeah I kinda reached the conclusion my self just after I posted it and did a final paranoia read through of it.

A lesson for future chapters ^^

Ok sir, this chapter did three things for me.
1. It reminded me of on of my most favorite stories, Luna the matchmaker
2. You made me like Discord more than I ever thought I would
And 3. You made me so made at Nightmare moon that I wish I could have been the one to Untermeyer destroy her and banish her from the world of the living.
Ok I think I might have gone a bit into my dark side there, but seriously, Nightmare moon, you dun screwed up.
Good story though.

6852760 Thank you for the comment it means allot to me

2. You made me like Discord more than I ever thought I would

I do my best to write Discord as a deeper character, I don't see him explored on a level deeper than "I'm so random!" Although there are a few stories out there that I absolutely adore him in <3

. You made me so made at Nightmare moon that I wish I could have been the one to Untermeyer destroy her and banish her from the world of the living.

Hehehe I will take it that I nailed what a vile creature she is?

This seems interesting I will give it a look later!