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Michael Hudson
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In my personal headcanon, their wives (Vinyl Scratch and Fluttershy, I'm guessing?) have already known for a long time, met up behind their back, discussed these two's affair, and let them continue. Vinyl 'cause she's kinky like that, and Flutters 'cause she's more than kind enough to share. The reason these two don't know yet is due to the fact they are still trying to hide it, and the tipping point would be Vinyl muttering something about hoping Tavi slips up so they can get it all in the open and share a big bed finally.
Later, the two couples are formally joined as a herd, Vinyl gets to taste what she's been missing out on with Big Mac, and Tavi helps her rock Flutters' world. Boom, happy ending.
7872391 As nice as this would be, for this to come true, it would need to have happened a few years before now. As is... If this were the case, it would make Vinyl and Marble (as that's who Big Mac is technically with) the worst people on the planet, as, since the two know, they should also know or be able to recognize the amount of damage that it's doing to these two ponies. Stringing them along is just cruel at this point.
I liked this short little story. It managed to make me empathize with two characters who are committing acts I would normally find unforgivable because it presents them believably as slaves to their desires. In a way, their weaknesses make them victims as well as victimizers.
I assume the downvotes are from people who object to the content of adultery. While I understand, I have upvoted for the quality of the prose and pathos.
7873148 I would love a sequel to the story just going to death about how it's affecting relationship and at the end of story has two choices happy ending and bad ending
7873621 I agree with you it's a very realistic look at things
It shows one important aspect. They both are married, they love there spouses. They will always love each other.
I liked the guilt and shame aspects and how they slept so close to his wife, like they wanted to get caught and suffer the consequences. My only criticism is no attention was paid to Tavi's clit. A good point for that would be when Mac wanted her to moan. Without changing it too much he could have one hand on a breast tweaking her nipple, the other rubbing her clit. That would definitely cause some fireworks.
Minor editing and fixes (mistakes in italic):
"before letting her bare breasts hugged his shaft." --> "before letting her bare breasts hug his shaft. "
"a light moan escaping her lips as she oved." --> "a light moan escaping her lips as she moved."
"and he was still considered large as far as stallions were considered." --> Maybe rewrite to get rid of double "considered."