ArtaFactia
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Welp, rarity pretty much on Fluttershy wrath list for stealing her waifu.
My one major gripe is that after sleeping through an entire day, neither Rarity nor Opal was going mad with hunger. The good bit was a bit short, but not bad. The build-up was good (so many fics just jump right to it... ugh), and I giggled at the twist at the end.
Overall, I'd say not bad. Good job.
7554491 I'm a fic homewrecker. Think she's your waifu? Nope, now she belongs to somepony else, mwahaha!
7554777 Mmm, yes, I guess I could have addressed the hunger thing. I'd like to think Opal just has a dish which she can eat from when she wants, but Rarity...I guess she should have had some breakfast first. I'll think about editing that in later when I've got some time.
And thank you, I'm glad it was acceptable. I'm still a bit of an amateur when it comes to this writing game. I do have some experience with erotic writing (mainly eRP in the past), but this is a little different since I'm handling the action from all angles, responding to myself. And yeah, it did turn out a little short, that bit, which surprised even me. I've always got some elements I know I'm going to use, but then I just let the rest of the writing flow and...this is what came out.
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Fluttershy successful made Rarity a lesbian XD
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7555716 idk, by the end of it you sounded surprised that they hooked up, not calm like a plan just came together XD
7555759 I assume you are responding as if to Fluttershy. T'was only a joke. Fluttershy likely had no idea the two diametrically opposed ponies would become close, let alone that they'd do anything sexual. She just wanted Rarity to get some help dealing with all that stress.
7555932 I know, I was just playin along, it's just fun to see fluttershy in awkward situations :P
Well, that was a different couple which I never thought about before, but that is definitely interesting when put together! I highly enjoyed this story and also the parts with Fluttershy since I absolutely adore her. So happy I found this fic and you really deserved a like.
7557473 Comment section RP, go! :P
7559028 Awww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :3
>> ArtaFactia You're welcome! I really did and I will definitely check out more of your fics. ^-^
She got a case of Desperatelustitis.
7561751 She came down hard with it. snrk
this was a fantastic read for me, l freaking love it, thank you ArtaFactia for writing this.
7565577 You're quite welcome!
I got to say that a Rarity/Tree Hugger clopfic is not something you see every day. Still, the story was awesome and I liked the concerned yet strong personality Fluttershy exhibits to convince Rarity to visit Tree Hugger. The clop scene was great, especially since Tree Hugger knows how to be assertive and direct when helping Rarity relax. The thing about the Sacral chakra makes me interested in learning more about them. You get a fav.
7708063 I'm always one for a good crackship. And I loved making Tree Hugger assertive; Rarity was on her turf, asking for her help, so it made sense in my mind that Tree Hugger would take charge. Plus...that's got echoes of femdom there. Mmmm~
Like and fav!
7716102 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^vv^