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Damien Darkside
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And here we go. This should be... "interesting", one way or another.
That was unexpectedly arousing. Given that I really don't have any kind of fetish for that sort of thing I'd say that's rather telling about your abilities as an author.
This is my fetish, and this was quite enjoyable.
Wow, that was good! An awesome sequel for this is their date, and maybe more
Hmm, this story... I can actually imagine this happening! Well written, good leading, few typos, some parts I had to read twice but very good in overall!
Nine outta ten!
Now, I demand more.
What about the rest of the mane 6? :D
Do you had plans to make a sequel? I half wonder how the world of hight class will reach with the human or he meeting the parents, or why Rarity now has a new and strangle tight accessory on her neck and refuse to remove it
Ssssoooooo.... Just going to throw this out there.... That kinda made me pass out a little bit from the sudden rush of blood to my... Um... Away, from my head.
Thank you much!
Fuck, it's only been a day and I've got so much love for this!
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Well fuck, that's the nicest thing anyone has said about my writing in five years :P
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Really? Only MLP story on choking I've ever read. Glad to know I'm able to help fill in some needs here!
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I'm going to keep this as a one-shot and tossed as much as I could into it. As with the three main choking actions (gagging, strangling and breathing control) and as intensely as I could make it.
HOWEVER, I have been getting SO much freaking good reactions over this (I made the featured box!) that I'll be writing more (with varying degrees of extremity) with OTHER ponies. Funny thing is, Rarity isn't even my favourite! She just matched this up.
Apparently I even was decent with the bullshit I wrote that you can call romance.
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Chokers are actually quite common and were really popular in the 90's for teens. As for sequels... well read above.
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You gotta go tenouttaten
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Us guys have two heads and only enough blood to operate one of them.
I would like to point to a similar one for all that are interested: You take my breath away
I like this one more (as in Damien's, in case that was not clear) (more likable character overall), but...
They seem eerily similar for not at least being an inspiration from one another.
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Greatly looking forward to reading this later
How's the idea of choking underwater sound to you though?
3948762 They are very similar, But this one has more detail and that bit extra story line makes this one better.
Smilies be all up in this bitch.
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Holy shit, are you serious? Wow that... that's something. I wish I could say I took inspiration from this since it is certainly really well done. Only story I got is that I found some choking pron on Motherless and thought it was hot. Taking inspiration like this would make me feel less dirty
Needless to say I had no idea that this story ever existed before you linked it, and thanks for linking! People can get more Rarichoke. That's what I'm calling it now.
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You should see what I clop to, well I guess you just read it.
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Why do you think Derpy's cutie mark is bubbles? SHE KILLS PONIES BY DROWNING THEM GET CELEST- *phone dial tone*
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Considering the popularity of that one, I'm taking it as a double compliment!
This is pretty good
, it's strangely similar to You Take My Breath Away, though.
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Read
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Though thanks for the compliment!
2 gud
Bueno
Jesus Christ, I think I found my seventh fetish.
This was pretty good, but I found some typos,
Isn't it supposed to be "it", not if?
You're missing an "r" at the beginning.
It's suppose to be "fine".
I think it's supposed to be "to", not you.
Hope that helps!
That was sweeter than I thought it would be. This was a good personality for an Anon and your dialog is great. I could see this happening
Wow. I honestly think I've never seen an asphyxiation story on this site before, props to you for being original. Also...
Mission accomplished.
Wow. This is... eerily similar to my own work. Not the actual buildup of what happens with the spa ponies, but the fetish and the erotic scene. It even has the same steps taken for the erotic scenes. I'm not sure how to feel about this with how many similarities there are.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82647/you-take-my-breath-away
Was this supposed to be inspiration from my own work? I could almost see that, seeing as I wrote mine back in December, 2012 (in my pastebin with a lot of my other work not even put on this site).
5210817 I didn't actually know about your story until a few of the comments were pointing me in your direction. I didn't join until somewhere in 2013, after your story would have been featured/etc.
Pretty much apart from the fact that our sex scenes followed the Blowjob - > Sex (like every other normal fic usually does) and that it involved asphyxiation, ours are quite different fundamentally. Safe words, lead up, relationship and other parts are different.
Plus seriously out of the Mane6, who else would wanna be choked out?
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I'm not saying that people can't write similar things, it does happen. I've read a few BDSM stories here and there that have similar characters, or other setups that have been written by other people whether it be erotic or not. But after looking this over, it does seem like a very eery amount of coincidences that add up to almost like it was based off the story that I wrote (note that I'm not saying it is, but it does appear like that). I can actually add things up for you right now why I think that is:
-The first are the simple things, such as what you see before reading. Yes, Rarity is used, and it does require a human. Not exactly something to mention, but things add up over time. What should be mentioned is that the humans name is not mentioned at all, much like mine. Just a small thing that normally wouldn't be noticed too much but should be pointed out since it's an oddity most stories wouldn't usually have (It's easier to write with a name than without). Another thing is the very odd similarity to the title of the story as well, which remarkably does seem extremely coincidental to my own.
-Absoluely Breathtaking (Taking Her Breath Away - chapter title)
-You Take My Breath Away
-The next would be the story's premise itself. How it leads up to the erotic scene is different, yes. My own is more of a tiff between the two (Rarity and the human) which the human tries to make it up, which leads to the erotica. Yours is a spa treatment, which leads to the erotica.
Build up wise, it's different. The erotic scene though, extremely similar in how things go. I wouldn't think too much into this since you do write it differently and it's not obviously copy/pasted from mine. But the scenes match extremely closely to one another, so it comes off like a rewrite of different interpretions, using the scenes as steps to take.
-Rarity talks of frustrations of estrus.
-Human agrees to help her out with getting it on.
-After agreement, Rarity confesses her fetish, which is asphyxiation (a fetish that is also in the forefront to my own story).
-Blow job scene commences, where human starts to choke her during said scene.
-Human blows load on face.
-Commence second step, the actual sex where, soon enough, more choking continues.
I will say that there are some differences in how it's written, such as you having Rarity telling him to bite her, but with how much is so mirrored to mine own step-by-step, it seems a bit too... off.
While alone on many things here, it's nothing to really look at. But adding all the small things up, from the title to the characters to the erotic scene's steps to the fetish, it does seem in the very least based off it. I'm not saying you stole my work at all, but from how I've reviewed your work over and over, it does appear like a portion is somewhat based off what I wrote. I'm not saying this to annoy you in any way, I just find it extremely odd something like this would happen. Also something to note, while you joined in 2013 and my story was featured before you came on for a short time, my story had been in a pastebin in early December, 2012.
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Well all I can say is that I had never heard of your story up to the point of dusparr mentioning it in the comment section. I'm not going to delete the comments that link to your story because hey, it's pretty good and sends a few views/favs/watches your way.
We can sit here tossing comments back and forth at each other, however this is the internet and really there would be nothing that could convince you otherwise. I didn't know about your story until it was given to me, really that is all I got to say about it.
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<head tilt> Was not expecting that.
Ham? Eww! Go with pork, much better.
Why would you model for Rarity? Your clothes will only fit you, and translate into clothing for bipeds, few and far between in Equestria.
5/10 Would be last member of Mane 6 to bang.
No, she is not. Why does everyone say that? She is your standard white unicorn with the optional ten pounds of cosmetics. Vinyl Scratch, Blackjack are you standard white unicorns with the optional kick-ass.
What about all the equipment in Twilight's basement?
It's too bad asphyxiation isn't more popular here.
I was directed here from another fic, also involving Rarity.
5251718 Why hello there. This is porn. You seem to be looking for something that actually has depth or a plot.
I wanted to write a story about mouthfucking Rarity. It happened and it apparently didn't appeal to you. Such is the internet
Thanks for stopping by and caring enough to leave a comment though.
Side note: Ham is Pork. All of the pig is pork. Ham is the hind leg of swine. Kinda like how Steak is a part of Beef.
5260380 Don't get me wrong, I did like it. I do like porn without plot or depth sometimes, and this was just fine for me.
I don't care for Rarity too much, but somehow she works well in asphyxiation clop. <shrug> I stand by my statement that there should be more asphyxiation, to bad my only clop got as much love as hate.
Side note: I don't care for pig at all, pulled pork is the only thing that does appeal to me.
5261400 Welcome to nobody can read tone on the internet! :D
Yeah choking really needs some more love. I always said that there should be NSFW tags allowed that are only viewable when you have "View Mature" on. I personally would love that.
I'm more of a steak guy. I will kill for steak.
I find that a quick clop is always more well-received than a long clop story. I am more of a fan of longer ones, but it is way easier for me to make one-shots with how much I work,
Great Story! Keep it up!
(S)excellent story! IT NEEDS A SEQUEL PRONTO!
Mad boners acheved! Blast off in 3.... 2..... 1..... We have epic clop repete we have epic clop!
dont get me wrong. its a good read. but... it seams to close to this one
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82647/1/you-take-my-breath-away/you-take-my-breath-away
Nice pun
... The Hayburger!
Great love-clop! Loved it. I was always a bit skittish about doing that I have very lager strong hands. Its easy to go from pleasure to "breath dam it!" But anywho It was hot!!!
This was a decent story. Right amount of sexy for an asphyxiation fetish, especially on your first clopfic. Good job and nice to see your beginnings to what you're grown into.
I just want to come back to this and just write about your balls for a moment, because holy shit, this was your first fic and it was one with a pretty hardcore fetish. You didn't start off vanilla, maybe lightly tapping into bdsm and then say "I want to experiment for a minute" before posting this, you just came out and said "Hello FimFiction! I'm Damien Darkside, and here's a fic about Rarity with a choking fetish!"
Says a lot about you, if you ask me.
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Balls of fucking diamond
Niiiiiice
I wish someone could be this romantic with me. Great story!
I'm not really into asphyxiation personally, but damn was that hot. It was just light enough to enjoy without delving into "shit did I kill her" territory. Nice amount of plot for a clop too, makes it feel like another day in Equestria instead of just "Hi, and then they banged."
Good shit here, much enjoyment.