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PrincessVanillaParfaitI
Trans cat lady who likes girls, boys, and everyone in between. Oh, and dragons. Lots of dragons. She/her. Profile picture by @spectrumashark on Twitter.
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nice work
*sitcom laugh track plays*
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Thank you very much! I'm happy people are enjoying it!
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What's the deal with introductions, anyway?
Very enjoyable! I admit it kinda makes me wish for a long form tale with some romantic development, but as a one off it was still super fun.
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I'll take that into consideration, but for now... I have lots of ideas!
After reading this and reading your Bio, I gotta agree. Dragons, are indeed hot.
9969098
Well, how do you think they breathe fire!
i'd just like to say thank you for being like the only author on the entirety of fimfiction to have enough consideration and basic decency to actually specify that its a male anon in the summary, so i dont have to use my time playing Find in this Page Detective to figure it out and inevitably wind up disappointed. seriously, thank u
...altho i cant deny its still a disappointment to a certain degree lol, cuz i mean, dom dragon rarity, what sane lady wouldnt want to be a part of that fantasy? here's hoping u decide to revisit this idea with a f/f twist someday!
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I might write an alternate version where the reader is female sometime this week or next. Thanks for the kind words!
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oooooh that woudl be AWESOME
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Done! I hope you enjoy!
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YAAAAAYYYYYYY ill read it as soon as i have a bit of free time i cant wait, thanks lots for being so nice and acommodating!!
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I just want as many people as possible to be able to enjoy it!
Have fun!
Well, that was intense. Dragoness on girl action is really hot, in both contexts.
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I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it! I'm planning on writing more!
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Nice. I'd like to see more. As a personal bit of curiosity, I wonder what a Flutterdragon story would turn out like.
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Nothing but good things could come of that, surely.
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It is Fluttershy, so yeah.
nice work
OK im done! so i start with some crticisms if thats ok:
- her having breasts was a little unexpected, not that i dont like them (obviously lol) but the story's cover picture depicts a much more non-anthro dragon than i think u were going for, and that was what i was expecting. i like both of course so its not a bad thing just pointing out that discrpeancy is there
- "You shudder, feeling your vagina get wetter as she climbs down your body." a little awkward, u can just say "feeling yourself get wetter" and it sounds more natural and conveys the same
- "As she pulls your pants lower, your vagina comes all the way out" yeah uh i think thats defeinitely a leftover of the original version lol. pussies dont really come out so much as they're just exposed, or newly visible, or that sort of thing.
- i love me some tribadism or grinding or whatever u wanna call it, but its less of a up-and-down motion than it is a back-and-forth one, where the skin (and/or scales) r always in contact and its the friction and motion and irregularities of whats rubbing our clits that gets us off
- girls dont cum very much in general, climaxes are more of an internal thing for us. we CAN squirt with a really sensational, special orgasm, but that generally requires finding and stimulating our g spot, which is inside us and thus needs fingers or toys, as well as some crazy clit action (and even then no guarantee). while rarity and reader rubbing pussies and clits woudl be extremely pleasurable and produce great orgasms, i dont think they'd be super juicy ones so much
- guys have a single big orgasm and their done and need to recharge, but for girls its common to have multiple climaxes following each other if our partner keeps going with it; there's no "going soft" part of it for us, so while we can get tired and thats definitely a factor (there are times when we're happy with just the 1 and more interested in pleasing our partner, cuddling, or just getting a good night's sleep lol), we can also keep going and hit another one and another one if we're into it and our partner's good and knows how to keep ramping it up
overall criticism is that u CAN tell it was written first as a mxf story
ok so like, i know that looks like a lot of criticism, but i seriously enjoyed this; u captured rarity's character and style very well, u properly conveyed how sexy rarity is and how sexy dragons are, the lead-up was great, the dominance was intimate and authentic, and the sex was still enjoyable enough for me to...lets just say it was enjoyable enough for me to enjoy it lol. i like ur focus on her claws and tail and scales especially.
even my overall criticism isnt really a complaint because the story was never MEANT to be a female reader, so the fact that u actually took the time and made the effort to give female readers a version to enjoy is really awesome of you and very generous. thank u so much!
from reading the other comments i get the feeling u may be writing more of these dragon x reader stories, and if so, i'd love to read them! and just as an idea, 100% fine if u dont want to, but u coudl try writing 1 of them first using a female reader, and then try adapting it to a male reader afterwards if u wanted to do the 2 versions thing again; if ur more familiar with male reader stories then it might be a more natural transition. just uh...if u do that, personal request, not for rainbow dash or pinkie pie, im not into them, but thats just a very personal request so feel free to ignore lol
anyway, pony x woman is hot, dragon x woman is hotter, and this story has been super hot and u did it very well! thank u again for including us in it!!!
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Thanks so much for all the criticism! I'll definitely go back through and give it another revision.
I had trouble finding cover art that I actually liked. None of it really matched the mental image I had, but this one was the closest. I would've commissioned something but I'm broke lol
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ur welcome, thanks for taking the criticism gracefully
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Of course! I appreciate the thorough feedback, especially since it gives me a better idea how to write for a female reader.
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and thats how u become a great writer :)
lemme know if u write any more f/f stuff, ill love to read it!
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I plan to!
great story, keep up the good work!
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Really happy you enjoyed it!
Loved it!!! Are you going to make a “Dragon Master Elusive - Female Reader” chapter?
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That's the plan! It'll probably be a few more days, though.
She?
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Ah, shoot. Thanks for pointing it out. Fixing now!
Now that I finally got to this chapter, a thought occurs to me. If you're going to do a series I suggest making the next one about Fluttershy. I would personally like to see a cute dragon seduction scenario.
I would love more stories like this, second person that has both female AND male second person. Great job, I love it.
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I do intend to write more, but honestly writing four different perspectives is a lot of work for me and I kind of feel weird about doing that for one story. But I do intend on writing lots of different stories with different gender matchups so hopefully that'll be good enough lol. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!
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Yeah thats a great idea. Hope for more from u soon
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Pardon?