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Sweetie Belle doesn't want to eat her veggies (especially yucky brussel sprouts!).
While looking through the library in Twilight Sparkle's castle, she comes across an ancient spell, that turns anything her horn or tongue touches, into a yummy sweet treat!
This is a dream come true for the little filly...or could it be too good to be true?
*Note: This story contains instances of gluttony, weight gain, and some name-calling.*
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Not the brussels sprouts. At least I lost the frogs. *croak*. NOOOO!!!!!!!!
Do ponies get dieabeatie?
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Pinkie Pie's still alive and kicking on the show after consuming all those different sweets...so I guess...no?
7846597 I'm Pretty sure she's the exception
Okay, this was adorable, and an absolute joy to read
The way you wrote it makes it not surprising to me if this was made into an episode of the show too
Nicely done!
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It appears mission was accomplished!
I write in a way that tries to skirt the line between what we know from the show, and bringing something new.
To me, I had to hear the show's VA's in my head, saying the lines. After awhile, I could see maybe Claire Corlett reciting a few lines with cotton in her mouth.
My main inspiration was "The Cutie Pox," which despite some disliking, had that same kind of life-lesson, that largely is something the lead filly has to cope with.
Though I did take a Hayao Miyazaki approach at the end, by not returning everything to normal later on.
Solid, very solid.
7847382 I rather like how you ended it, I must say
I wouldn't say no to a sequel about her struggling through this diet either
I liked this a lot more than I expected to. Good job.
7847451 you should do sequel. I know a comic series on deviantart made by Virus-20. You could inspire it by this comic. Link to comic
7847854 Well, I'd like to see what the original author could do :3
But I might try something similar to that
7850297 Knock yourself out, dude.
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In truth, I don't think there's anymore to add to it. But, that's my opinion.
Part of it was a test, jist to see if I could make a small, entertaining expansion story, in the wake of the multi-part one I'm also doing.
7850297 Message me if you're going to make a story about this comic.
Man, all of this could have been avoided if Mom and Dad just made Sweetie some good vegetables, like asparagus or green beans.
"Having it torn asunder"? Dude, having a fetish story with a like/dislike ratio as good as it has is very rare on FIMfic, outside of popular authors like Megapone.
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Well, at the time this story was released, my Expansive Romance story was looking at around 12 dislikes, and 5 likes. It wasn't until I started adding chapters, that the count started to go up.
Though one person who was the basis for Coral Leaf in that story, told me this was the norm for fimfic stories, though it being my first story, I didn't expect some to make me feel as if I had written The Phantom Menace.
Still, I love the mass of thumbs up for The Sweetie Touch. This type of story could so easily be upped to really bloating her up, but the goal for me, is always 'story first, and then we worry about the fetishists.'
Things got pretty dark when Sweeitebelle almost ate her sister. I like it.
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Always an effective way to learn the lesson.
I personally saw that coming, it happens with every "Midas touch" story
It definitely reeds out like one of those old cautionary folk lore tales. Only last Grimm dark
Ahhh this was great! Somehow Sweetie Belle is both innocent and mischievous at the same time and it's adorable. Love the storybook feel to this tale. And yes, I did get the feeling of this being like an early season episode.
i like how this is the first and last line of the fic.
A reminder that Midas realized how bad his namesake power was only after hugging his daughter.