I loved this story. Only details you missed is what race all the babies are.

8299356 May as well add that...as well as that this story is actually completed.

8299368
Thank you very much.

Lmao it's called hotdogging

8299902
Ah, its called that with two females as well? Thought that was only with one. Thanks for the info though, I'll change it soon.

Froststorm

I seriously misread that as Frostmourne for a bit.

So...did Pound, Pumpkin and Flurry ever tell their parents (and Pinkie) that their pregnancies were completely accidental? First Pound and Pumpkin collided in a game of tag, causing Pound to discover that fillies (and mares) don't have 'sheathes'. This was followed by impromptu exploration of the two different set of reproductive organs, until the smells overwhelmed their rational minds.

It wasn't like the trio even knew what this was, until said adults returned.

8299902
I had thought of that, but hotdogging generally refers to between the butt cheeks.

whom they named Froststorm

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 and thanks once again to ‘Frost’ for commissioning

Hm...... wonder where that name came from....

they decided to allow her to keep the foal after her pediatrician said that Pumpkin would be able to safely carry a foal to term at her age.

That pediatrician should be fired.

8300186
Yes but it's a pretty broad term.

8300855
Lmao made my day

8299961 WoW lore.

8300067 I added that clarification. Thanks

8300577 No idea...

8300855 Horses work a lot different than humans do, as do most animals. Specifically, most horse mares are actually bred at age four. Many species’ females are capable of successful breeding and birthing by age two, and males are virile at two to four years of age. So, the pediatrician would be completely wrong for a human of the same age, who don’t sexually mature until 8~14 y/o or so, but a pony? Perhaps not.

8301125
I would have been perfectly fine if you said, "it's just a silly story, logic need not apply", but since you're trying to justify it I will have to argue a bit. Age means nothing when comparing animals. What really matters is relative maturity. Those animals that birth at such young ages are actually the equivalents to sexually mature teenagers for humans. The fillies in your story are the equivalent to children around eight years old. Maybe younger given their language (don't remember their ages in the fic). No matter the species, giving birth at the relative age of eight is more risky than giving birth at the relative age of eighteen. No exceptions (well, okay, there are exceptions, but that wouldn't sound as good, would it?).

Since it's rare for any children of a species to be fertile at such a relative age anyway, it's pretty much just porn logic. Which is fine until you try to justify it as if it's realistic.

Cuties!

8301125
One more thing: I'm not a veterinarian or anything, but reading That Night in the Bass-ment (a pretty good Rarity/OC clop story) made me aware of the fact that mares can undergo self-abortion (in our world of non-sentient equines, this is to ensure the foals don't get killed if the lead stallion is replaced, as said new lead stallion would want his genes passed on, not those of his predecessor).

If the parents didn't want their daughters to keep their foals, they could've just had the fillies undergo that self-abortion process, instead of having to undergo a ponyfied version of human abortion, which I, as a 19-year-old male who's never been that interested in having a girlfriend, have no clue what it involves.

Just thought I'd point that out.

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The fillies in your story are the equivalent to children around eight years old. Maybe younger given their language (don't remember their ages in the fic).

I personally view Pound and Pumpkin being ~12 in this story, and Flurry about 10, at which age colts become sexually mature and fillies start going into heat; according to EquiMed, Terra (our human earth’s) fillies reach sexual maturity at 12-15 months, while Terra Colts have to be at least 15 months old to be considered 'sexually mature'. This would be about the equivilant age if Equestria’s ponies age the same rate as humans (if a bit faster at their first years in my headcanon, in that they can talk imperfectly by age 1 and are able to communicate with body language since birth like real-life horses).

No matter the species, giving birth at the relative age of eight is more risky than giving birth at the relative age of eighteen. No exceptions.

This is true but, again, they are sexually mature at 10-12. Is it safe for a human girl to give birth at age 12? Not as safe as a fully matured adult, no. Is it possible? Yeah. For that matter, is it possible for a girl of 8 to give birth? I’ve heard of a 7-year-old successfully, naturally birthing a child, so yeah.

Besides that, equine reproductive anatomy is significantly different than human as you probably well know. Mares are designed to stretch significantly ‘in there’, even more than humans, as well as Flurry’s being explained in-story as ‘magically aided’. But, again, ponies =/= humans.

8301253
indeed.

8301396
I know that fact; I also wrote that story. Yeah, self-abortion is a thing in equines, but the parents didn’t want the fillies to self-abort the foals given they were physically mature enough to carry them safely, and both fillies wanted to keep them.

... instead of having to undergo a ponyfied version of human abortion, which I, as a 19-year-old male who's never been that interested in having a girlfriend, have no clue what it involves.

In pre-fetal human abortions, generally, they use a vacuum to suck the embryo and everything else in the womb out through the cervix, then dispose of it. Then there’s fetal abortions, but that’s just...too horrible for me to describe...

8303201 Feel free to read the above and below discussions regarding that.

8303575

I also wrote that story

I forgot to check the author...I just remembered that part of the story, and what I learned from it.

...Well, hey, at least you know I like your stories, right?

I really like that stuff, happy sex with foals and pregnancy, that is just it :D please keep up the good work :)

a vary good short story.
and a super good read.

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I'm happy you both enjoyed my writing! Thanks for the kind words.

Am I the only one who would scream "abortion" if I was in Pound's shoes? 2 kids at the age of 11? fuck dat shit! hell, i might even leg it Dose that makes me a cunt?

8321722 The commissioner, nor I, were interested in doing anything magical like that. Just simple, fumbling stuff

8325060 The commissioner, nor I, wanted to bring the epic hellstorm of negitive comments and downvotes that even fictional abortions can bring. Besides that, I love seeing the mares/fillies getting pregnant in the end and having a happy family.

I wonder if Alicorns are a True Breeding race. I guess we'll probably never know canonically.

and even then, parents fault for not teaching it in the first place. Blame all over the place. But Equestria is Equestria we suppose...

8330992 Clearly not, as Shining is a unicorn and Cadence is an alicorn. They're also OK with, at least in my story, Flurry and Pumpkin being allowed to have Pound's foals and later are in a herd together so there's that.

8333475 Parents are to blame for not being more private and Pinkie's to blame for falling asleep while watching them. Overall though, it ended up well in the end.

8333553
Agreed

Well this was a very good story. Pound had a guys dream, but ended up with at least two foals. All he can say in his mind is "Fuck."

8334057 Well, he not only got laid by two young mares sequentially, he then ended up with not only two foals, but also two lifelong lovers and mates. So, in my eyes, that's a win-win.

8333553
Have Shining and Cadence had a non-Alicorn kid I haven't heard of yet? The only kid we've canonically seen from a relationship involving at least one Alicorn is Flurry who is an Alicorn. A single data point isn't enough to PROVE that Alicorns are True Breeding but Flurry certainly doesn't prove otherwise.

A True Breeding race is one that when they mate with another race that's not a True Breeding race every single child will be of the True Breeding race.

8335139 Ooooh, I misunderstood. I though you meant true breeding as in Alicorns would only be in a relationship and mate with other with Alicorns.

On that note it would make sense that Alicorns only produce Alicorns no matter the sperm donor's race, given their rarity. Perhaps their race-deciding genetics basically overpower any other race's, making the foal always be an Alicorn.

8334170
True...well still very well done story. Im favoriting this so its says in my archives.

8400992
Yep, it's a real thing that horses, sheep, and goats do!

That was so epic/awesome to read with a matching ending.

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8563001 I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. Thanks for reading the sequel too!

This chapter made me smile SO HARD i love happy endings so much(in fact when a story i read has an unhappy ending i like to fantasize a self insertion of my oc rectifying the lack of a happy ending via revealing timeline info)

8603325
I do enjoy a happy ending as well, which is why all my stories have one, with only one being even bittersweet.

Cette fin !
That was fun! :D

great job my friend. I enjoyed reading it

I think I'd want to see a third story where Pound Cake tries to be Prince Pound Cake and tries to go WWF like his name suggests to defend his twin sister and Stone Cold Stuns Rumble and Thunderlane and has Flurry Heart and Cadence's Foals, like his eye is after a Post Divorced Cadence.

8858604 ...um, what?

Wow. Another good romancy foalcon. You seem to be master of these. Good work, sir!

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Thanks! Those just so happen to be what I'm mostly commissioned for it would seem.

8300855
Why? Apparently he didn’t lie.

I want to know Twilight's reaction to Flurry being pregnant

I mean in, 'The One Where Pinkie Pie Knows' she was like,
"I'm going to be an aunt!? This is wonderful! I must tell everypony! Hey Applejack did you hear the news? I'm going to be an aunt!"

" Yes, Sugarcube. I was right next to you "
"Oh yeah."

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Let's just say Pinkie wasn't the only one throwing a party for Flurry, Pound, and Pumpkin when she found out about them. ;)

9511043
Carring children at that young of a age can kill u if ur body is not strong enough

9962565 Can, but not in this case. As soon as a female can orgasm, she can physically give birth. In this case, there was no risk, so he gave it the all-clear. They were physically matured enough to carry the foals to term with no added risks.

9962565
Again this is a fiction about cartoon chracters having sex what did you expect.