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Silvermyr
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That was very cute, unf and in-character for both of them, Cozy is a lucky filly!
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i love it :D
That was… very sexy, but moreover, extremely romantic. Amazing job.
Cozy just casually simultaneously knowing and not knowing what sex is
Very nice story, i liked it ^^
This is the best kind of clopfic. The one that isn't pure clop but is actually more about the characters and how they feel. Which is honestly the things I love about stuff like this, seeing them connect on the deepest level.
This also briefly fuels my love for seeing Cozy as a mother or caretaker, because of one minor paragraph that adds so much in my opinion.
Enjoyed it! Read through all of Castling Cozy Glow just for this and I don't regret it in the slightest.
Wow, Cozy Glow x Rumble. I bet chaos and hilarity ensue in this story.
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That's a lot of reading to do for one clopfic. I hope you enjoyed both these stories. I know I do.
In all honesty, it has a good balance of lemon and romance
Meanwhile, Twilight is still single.
Very cute piece n___n
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Oof
i'm sorry
Groovy.
And to think... they still have one more wing to go. I wonder how long it'll take before they realize they were so busy rutting, they never got to her other wing.
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That means two things can happen:
A) She does it on her own tomorrow like she said she would.
B) She conveniently forgets everything rumble taught her, so he has to show her again.
Since this is Cozy we are talking about, I think I know which of these is going to happen.
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Since it's Cozy we're talking about, I suspect she's going to learn to approach a whole butt-load of stallions (and perhaps mares who are atracked to other mares) and ask them to "teach" her how to groom her wings. They'll fall so in love with her, that she'll be able to gain total control over all of them! (*Camera zooms into my evil face for dramatic effect.*) Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-You do write these characters really well.
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when she leasts expects it-- least.-
to subtile for her to notice it starting-- spelling is a very subtle art.-
his eyes on his price-- his price? How much does Rumble cost, anyway?-A little vague on their positions in the preening/masturbation scene.
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"We'll start directly then!"-- doesn't really sound like Rumble.-'Oh golly' starts to be pretty overdone. I know she actually does say that a lot, but it gets kind of overbearing, like when people write Rarity and have her say ‘darling’ too much.
-Nice impregnation scene, even though it wasn't really happening.
-I like the instinctual parts of Rumble's behavior. That was done very well.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 85/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 75/100
Immersion: 80/100
Prose Quality: 86/100
Total Score: 406/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
This marks the first time that 'golly gee' could be use as a climax scream.
Not sure if you already know, but there’s actually a fanart of Rumble preening Cozy’s wing
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No, I haven't seen that. Can you give me a link (if it is SFW)?
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Not sure what qualifies as sfw on fimfiction, but you can search easily search for it on derpibooru with the tags Rumble and Cozy Glow, and you should be able to find it rather easily. Look for one that’s labeled suggestive
Will this story have a sequel?