A Non-canon Valentine Chapter
Roses are red, Celestia loves cake.
I know it's been awhile since the last update.
But, it's Hearts and Hooves day, I should give it my best
That, and Forest just won't let me rest.
I care for my sisters and hope they understand
that I just went for a walk that went out of hand.
I've been on a adventures only me and Forest knows
And all have been done without a single YOLO.
But I digress, I still have a point to declare-
...
Thorax what the hell are you doing here?
Ok, whatever, I care for my Woona and Tia's has my heart.
If someone dares hurt them I'll tear them apart.
That seems kind of violent and some may agree
But if you actually believe that, you don't know me.
I hope they can forgive the crimes that I've done
And look at me now as the mare I've become.
Chrissy says hi, and it's been a blast
She's still kind of dopey from getting fucked in the-
Oh, Tia its great to see you come stop by
I'm doing quite well, ok and goodbye
I wonder how Shiny's relationship with Cadence been getting
I still can't wait for that Faust damn wedding.
The doctors say that I shouldn't strain myself
So I'm stuck in bed trying to defend my poor health.
But Luna lent me a quill, some parchment, and ink
And now I'm writing all the rhymes I can think
To try and make a nice poem for you
My sisters, my friends, and sweet viewers too.
I wonder if Thorax is going to be alright
His breathing is heavy and his cheeks are alight.
Maybe It's because I'm holding him down with my wing
Or it could be the sappiness leaking out from this thing.
Oh, damn it, I'm getting way off track
well I guess I'll thank my sisters for always having my back
Except for that time when Luna tried to run me through,
Or that time you both sent me to the moon
Or I guess the time you told a legend about me
Glorified as a villain for an eternity
But the past is past and I'm happy that I'm out
But could you please keep the servants from screaming out loud
Ugh, I hate being sappy and I wish I was through.
But, I just want to say I still love you two.
Though you both used the elements and put me through hell,
here's my thoughts in a moon-themed nutshell.
I guess I deserved it, I tried to cause eternal night
And you two both did what you deemed right
And though I spent a thousand years alone
I'm so proud on how independent you've grown
Tia, I know I sometimes I seem mean
But someday I think you'll make a great queen
And Luna, sweet Luna, your future's so bright
One day you'll be able to rule over my night
I'll say again I'm so proud of you two
Because one of these days it will only be you.
One of these days my story will come to an end
and if there's a sequel it all just depends
One day you'll both understand just what I mean
But I'll just keep writing my poem...
That you'll never read.
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*Kicks down Abbaddon's front door
"EN GUARDE"
Well I was entertained
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This began completely nuts and ended bittersweet. Kudos, and I believe Lulu and Celly should read this one nightmare is gone. It would be appropriated
Well, it's nice.
One remark tho
Imho sounds way better. It's original end just irritates my rhythm based ocd.
Because mean ≠read.
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Yeah, I know the first chapter's a little flat. I would say I would make a huge reaction out of being on the moon, but that's kind of the thing that pisses me off about stories. Yeah, I know the backstory is important but I'm not trying to make the character normal. It's just a goof-ball stuck in Equstria and being nutty is how they cope.
It's kind of how I would handle the situation.
But anyway's apologizes for the disappointing chapter.
*Next Chapter*
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7947700 I fell of my bed laughing at this post
7947976 nearly passed out at this one
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Excellent
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I'll be dam that was badass
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whens the next chapter anyways i read this story 8 times now
Well i will admit that this made me burst out laughing at points, i cant wait to see this update.... if it updates!
P.s Really love the fact that nightmare is the third sister, i will admit that was a shock and I love it
We great chapter it's getting very interesting to read keep up the good work update soon
I don't know what interest me; the story's drawing... or the description of the story... I'm going to love reading this story
When is the next chapter?
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Unless you read the books, then both succumbed to the dark side.
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Yep
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i agree that more is required
Ok, after reading the first chapter, I scroll into the comments and see a comment saying this fic is dead dead. The most recent Chapter upload date all but confirms this, so I'm not getting into this unless the author sets my comment and confirms that they will continue to update this. I'm not making the mistake of getting into a fic that's not gonna get finished again.
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Don't worry I'm planning on updating. Just having to rewrite a bit
Argh, filler chapter. Well.. it's something.
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Awesome I love this story
Hello?
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It's me.
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Any more soon?
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Yeah. I hope so.
Put a watch/tracking on this, hope there will be a new chapter.
Oops, didn't notice this was a dead fic.
Nice poem/song/whatever this was supposed to be
This is a fun story and i hope to see more of it
Please update
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Ahhh fallout is an amazing series
love the poem...save the last line *grabs paintball gun an 10 galleons of white-out*
I still stand by my previous comment. When she eventually get's called out on her behavior she just pleads insanity, try staying on the moon for a thousand years singing the same song over and over again. Better than the typical cliched over done SI crap that will come she if tells the truth examples, trying to find away home, restoring nightmare, long winded explanation about earf, telling everyone their worlds a cartoon and life's a lie, or having her get attacked for taking over her nightmare's body. Been there done that, it's way more fun just to lie about it like a real person would do.
This fic's not dead, just going through some technical difficulties.
Please continue
Is it dead?
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-ING DOOM
Am I r/woooosh ing or did did you mis-remember that the bfg 9000 is from
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I never played it
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Though I'm playing Skyrim
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I have to admit... Although the writing could use a little work, this is a pretty good comedy story.
You sir, are one of the best writers I've ever witnessed. I really hope you come back but I'm glad you got even this small amount out, best time spent reading in a while.