• Member Since 24th Sep, 2015
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Grasshopper Keller


Just a Colorado brony who makes some good stories. Celestia and Pinkie Pie are best ponies!

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Series of shorts with a Human in Equestria, named Anon, making some time to cuddle with the ponies in Ponyville.

[My first attempt at creating an 'E' rated story. Inspired by 'Dear Spike!' from the author named Closer-To-The-Sun. Hope you guys like it! Also: If any of you want a sequel, let me know.]

P.S. Despite the art cover from pinterest.com, all of the mane 6 are ponies!

Thanks for the Feature!! :pinkiehappy:

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 46 )

:rainbowkiss: I think I just had a cuteness induced heart attack.

Is it just me or does anyone get the thought that pinkie pie would purr whilst being cuddled

7115785 i can see that :pinkiehappy:

I may have forgotten that the ponies were supposed to purr during the cuddling, but I encourage everyone reading to think of the ponies doing that.

You forgot one pony, that is if you don't mind adding as a bonus chapter, DERPY! :derpytongue2:

7117578 I only put in the main characters, whereas Derpy is just a side character, because it's how I wanted to write this small story. But I do hope that you enjoyed it! :pinkiesmile:

7117600 Oh, don't worry I did. Especially the one with applejack and rainbow dash, since i ship them together so hard. :pinkiehappy:

7117760 :ajsmug: Just like I ship Rarity and Fluttershy. :rainbowdetermined2:

Very nice little short story, my friend. Have a cold one. *gives root beer* :twilightsmile:

7118772 *takes a gulp* Aaahh... thanks, Harms! :pinkiesmile:

Well, that was a heartwarming read....:heart:

The 'I love you' part of these chapters are reading rather repetitively. Mix things up a bit! Maybe have the character say it when he's drop dead exhausted and not expecting or anticipating amorous reciprocation. Or have him say it after he gets hurt protecting his significant other. I'd really like to see you change things up and not have this cut-and-paste 'I love you' scenes.

7222191 That is actually a better suggestion. But then again, this was my first time making an E-rated story, so yeah. :twilightsheepish:

Not bad my man, but it's a little too short for even a one-shot. Just my two cents though.

And then Big Mac ruins the moment by telling you that, if you break AJ's heart, he'll beat you until your face resembles applesauce.

7294122 makes since seeing as i have a little sister and feel about the same way

7265751 The point was to make it a one-shot short.

7294122 Nah! But that would've been funny as hell! :rainbowlaugh:

7336295 nice to hear that as well. even though i may not be the nicest to my sister cause how she treats me but thats different in my opinion at least

7336292
just for clarification, is twilight on this story already got a castle or still live at golden oaks library?

20 people need to be hugged. :fluttercry:

This is my favourite kind of story, short and cuddly. Please keep making these

7361667 I'd say castle.

All of the newest books in Twilight Sparkle's library have been fully organized, along with some of the old books that she took pride in having in her library.

And then Maud appears, her Maud Sense having gone off, and warns you, jaw clenching and eyes a-fire, that, if you ever break Pinkie's heart, the police will never find your corpse.

7114729 Join the club. We have cheese dip!

Cuddles with Ponk. Great time!:heart::pinkiehappy:

Cute. I kinda expected Granny Smith to say, "IT'S ABOUT TIME!".

Thanks for these little nuggets of cuteness. Here, have a like.

Hey! Where's Angel... Oh well. I kind of expected him to jump out of nowhere!

And little Sweetie Belle turned out to be spying the entire time!

7647824 Justice, do ya have any cookies? I'm in a near-death situation. Death by cuteness!

7977117 Gonna have to make a run to the store for that one. Do you have a cookie preference?

Loved these short but sweet stories :twilightsmile:

did it say picture? :trixieshiftleft: mwehehehehehe...

7979694 anything is okay! sorry for the late response

Great Story. I give it a prefect 10 out 10 :twilightsmile:

I've read all but one of these stories, and I really enjoy them. If I had to say which is my favourite, it has to be the 'Rarity' story. Next up is Fluttershy, and I'm sure it'll be just as good as the other five chapters in this series.

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