• Published 6th Apr 2016
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The Perfect Mate - Twisted Brew



After years of settling back into normal society, Luna requires one final thing to allow her to function properly in her every day. In short, someone who's company she enjoys that can help sate her powerful alicorn desires.

Comments ( 43 )

Noice.:moustache:

If you plan on doing more chapters like this, that would be swell.:raritywink:
In wich case, I have a question for Ryan.

Ever considered starting to build motorcycles? Just imagine Luna in a leather and denim outfit on top of a Harley or a Honda.:rainbowkiss:

Eh, I'd rather have just had the threesome with Luna and Celestia in full detail.

I Will be glad to receive your description of how you look for I try to draw you. I don't draw very well but I can try to make something awesome.

I want to Draw you, Brain and the Ryan the Beast.

Any more stories planned for this universe?

OH DEAR GOD THAT ENDING WAS TOO FUCKING GOOD!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: "breaks the laughing rainbow emoji" well....shit. i laughed too hard for fim fic to handle. OH WELL!!!:pinkiehappy:

Had i known about the questions i would have asked one of my own... :fluttercry:

I Just skipped to the end... I Really saw this all 'coming' within the first 6 CHAPTERS

that was good.

Comment posted by Twisted Brew deleted Sep 1st, 2016

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Then explain how he thought about wanting a drink and gets one all of a sudden, then after his conscience goes "Fuck your shit!" and a bottle mysteriously gets thrown at Celestia the next chapter? :duck:

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Oh and forget I said Sun hater. :pinkiehappy:

7529772 Discord followed them, remember? He could have done that :P
As for the launching of the bottle, that was just his brain's reaction to Celestia being near.
And yes, I am a bit of a sun hater. I am not Celestia's biggest fan XP

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First time a conscience ever done that, and since you are not a fan of Celestia, I guess I won't let you see any of my Celestia fiction I plan out soon. :trollestia:

Always with the Thief or Homeless human plot huh? Can't wait to read if this sucker becomes a slave of all things. :facehoof:

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Don't worry I saved it. Also God damned Zoidberg wooping noises.

7547035 You know you love it!

7642739 yeah is she dead and what did they do with her and her weapon

7643445 She dead, that's that. :P

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then tell me I must know, how does one create such beautifully crafted wtf moments such as that :rainbowderp:

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Er, yeah. Kinda like every single time. Through both Perfect Mate stories.

7925195 ...I'm mad at myself now...IMMA FIX IT!!!

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Well, you get on with your bad self, then.

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So I wasn't the only one who noticed

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WOOOOOOO FREE BEER

One of the best Human x Luna

This was a grate story! Thanks for ze awesome read!

Loved it from beginning to end. Some of my favorite parts were the dominating then scared Cadence and Nightmare Moon seeing Ryan's demon. I was kinda hoping you'd have branched out the demon parts a bit like having them meet in the real world or something. But that wouldn't work out as Luna already finished her demon arch in the actual show. Still, great fic. /)

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Thanks, buddy. I'm glad you enjoyed it /)

JDH

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By the way, I'm on the sequel and is he ever going to run into blueblood?

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Never has. It kinda didn't occur to me during the time I was writing...

JDH

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Are you still writing the sequels, and if so, definitely blueblood

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The sequal to this particular installment of The Perfect Mate has been brought up, questioned, and possibly even abandoned..Sorry

Don't like Savage comedy.

Love the randomness of his brain, and the comedy. Great story.

Nicely done! I love Ryan and Luna as a couple and the heart and humor were both great!

I'm quite literally sad that this ended I'mma be sure to save this so I can continuously read it over and over again this is one of my favorite stories that actually hit my heart which is a rarity I didn't even cry while watching saving Private Ryan and that s*** was horrific

Thanks for this wonderful story!:heart:

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