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The Feels Are Strong
I think I would be a good deal annoyed if someone just walced into my head. She borderline mind ****ed him.
more chapters please!!!!!
7171836 now for the physical form
I think I have a rough idea now why he was on Death Row.
AM I REALLY THE ONLY ONE WHO IS CATCHING THE S.A.O ABRIDGED REFERENCES HERE?! THE FUCK PEOPLE?! So uncultured...
7407884 Buddy, don't even see the references. And I wrote the thing. What am I missing?
7407884 Yes yes, we're savages.
Feels like you dropped the ball on the two dark sides meeting each other ( I guess i'll call it that ) felt like it was being set up as a unstoppable force meets an immovable object. But ends up being that she doesn't even confront him and he just gives in as soon as he sees her. Especially when it's supposed to be their emotion locked away. Just feels a bit off.
Why is give me an impressive that is written direct from the future? this there something you hiding from us? ....
7407884
Bite me.
Ehhh idk feel its moving too fast other than that not bad
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The pacing in this is pretty awful.