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Perfectly Insane


I've been writing for, like, 8 years, and I still don't know what I'm doing. https://ko-fi.com/perfectlyinsane

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7218719 I appreciate the support, I'd also appreciate it if you told other people about this. I want people to read my story, whether they give negative or positive feedback.

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7219033 Well I think it's better to make long chapters so the story is shorter and people get more out of it, then to make short chapters which will mean there will be more chapters and people will get less out of it.

7312979 For me, who cares if it's an original line or not? It's a good story so quite the whining, shut up and enjoy it.

7315515 I'm not saying you don't like it man, I meant the one's who did dislike this.

7316321 I love reading this though, gives them both a little more intake than just kill with insanity and end it.

7316680 Other awesome works. :pinkiehappy: Checking one out now you wrote that has to do with the human version of Pinkie.

Way better than Batman V Superman

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7356604 Thanks, I appreciate the support.
If you liked this, you should go check out my other stories.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

7663191

Mostly it is due to dislike or being tired of the source material. Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory are now old and variations, "sequels", and retellings are all old hat by now. So some people essentially automatically downvote for that reason.

As for this it is funny that Pinkie mentions her first sexual experience before she really went off the deep end. The way she talks about Pinkie (and in some ways how Dash talks about her) actually feels like that the killing and sex may be coming back.

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7662777 Thanks for the writing complement, and why doesn't it spark your interest? Is it because the idea's old, or because of me. Also, I wrote this because it needed to be done. Considering these are literally two of the most infamous things in the fandom, and the connection between the two, they would eventually have a showdown, I'm just surprised no one else has done it. This isn't just a crossover of these two, I plan on doing other sequels with other fandom creations. Such as Butchershy, little miss Rarity, etc.

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7663191 Honestly, I don't get it either. Other than the length of the chapters, which I tried to lower down, there is no real issues with it.

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7663242 Coming back is assuming it ever stopped, it didn't. Also, it's true the idea of these two have been overused many times. But no matter how far I've searched, no one's done a crossover of them fighting each other. All it mostly is, is them becoming friends with each other and killing together. But I can't help but be intrigued at the idea of a psychotic killer like Pinkamena, and a narcissistic mass murder like Rainbow Dash at each other's throat.

This is going to be awesome

Perfectly Insane
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7663533 Maybe, but it will take time. You can read some of my other work to keep yourself occupied if you want.

7218719 what is the 3rd most famous horror in the Brony community?

Perfectly Insane
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7747681 Probably Little Miss Rarity or Butchershy, it's a tie.

Hello Perfectly Insane,
i would just like to let you know.
I have seen many hate comments through out the comments of this story.
that most likely discouraged you.
i just want to say i enjoyed what is here.
You have at least one fan of this story.
:)

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7942113 Then you'll be glad to know another chapter is in the works.

good chapter looking forward to more, your improving as a writer

Caught Pinkie but for how long... Pinkie saying things all Sultry it would be funny if in addition to wanting to kill Dash if Pinkie was also attracted to her just to make things even more weird for Dash.

Yay, I now have 3 new chapters to read cause I somehow missed the updates :pinkiehappy:

Does the story live or shall this be another "pinkies personalitys" one can only hope not

Love the story hope to see more

Does she have hooves or hands?
“The shackles made it quite difficult to get it, she had to lower her head down to her hooves.” “ But when she did, she managed to hold the chalk in her hands quite easily.”

Cool. A changeling seems appropriate in this situation. I enjoyed this chapter.

I liked the goodbye kiss. I like it when Pinkie acts on the sexual tension like that even if there is no relationship or anything like that.

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It’s her nature, it’s also a good to mess with the psyche of people she’s trying to mess with.

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It especially works with Dash. They have this respect/hate or aversion/attraction thing going on.

I had forgotten about this, so it was a pleasant surprise before bed. Keep up the good work.

But she was eagerly speaking to the pony beside her, which was probably why she was happy. But what shook her wasn’t Fluttershy’s personality, it was who she was talking to. She was talking to a ghost, someone who shouldn’t be here, someone who shouldn’t be anywhere. Rainbow Dash.



She was normal, happy, even. She seemed to be laughing at something, probably a foal hood story only her and Fluttershy would know. There were no scratches or wounds on her body, nothing even remotely indicating she’d been tortured. Her wings were still intact, her cutie mark unharmed and still on her flank. Everything about her seemed normal, like nothing happened like their party never happen. And that both shook, and enraged Pinkamena. For once, she had no words or jokes. She had nothing to say or do, she could do nothing but stare.

This is fantastic, also I knew she was still around tougher than you thought Pinkamena.

great story KEEP IT UP!

Rainbow, noticing both One and Two were looking around, began to do the same. This room was the same as she remembered it, with the heads on the wall, the dim lighting of the room, the smell of death and carnage. She even noticed the lack of certain things, the ‘life if a party’ sign was missing, as was the table with skulls on it, maybe those were only there for effect? She probably liked to inflict mental and emotional damage as well ass physical, the sign and skulls were probably stored somewhere, which reminds her.

Is that supposed to be life is a party

“P-protocol requires that in the scenario of multiple riots, as many guards as possible are to patrol the entire factory while checking all prisoner cells. The rest are used to clean up the mess made by the riots, which includes piling up all the bodies of the failures so they can be counted and put into The Pegasus Device. While the bodies of any staff and cleaned and prepared to be sent back to their families. There was a surprising amount of casualties on our side, so we have no guards to spare.”

That's supposed to be are

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Your pointing out of the grammatical errors on my stories is much appreciated, thank you.

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