Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

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Mostly it is due to dislike or being tired of the source material. Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory are now old and variations, "sequels", and retellings are all old hat by now. So some people essentially automatically downvote for that reason.

As for this it is funny that Pinkie mentions her first sexual experience before she really went off the deep end. The way she talks about Pinkie (and in some ways how Dash talks about her) actually feels like that the killing and sex may be coming back.

7662777 Thanks for the writing complement, and why doesn't it spark your interest? Is it because the idea's old, or because of me. Also, I wrote this because it needed to be done. Considering these are literally two of the most infamous things in the fandom, and the connection between the two, they would eventually have a showdown, I'm just surprised no one else has done it. This isn't just a crossover of these two, I plan on doing other sequels with other fandom creations. Such as Butchershy, little miss Rarity, etc.

7663191 Honestly, I don't get it either. Other than the length of the chapters, which I tried to lower down, there is no real issues with it.

7663242 Coming back is assuming it ever stopped, it didn't. Also, it's true the idea of these two have been overused many times. But no matter how far I've searched, no one's done a crossover of them fighting each other. All it mostly is, is them becoming friends with each other and killing together. But I can't help but be intrigued at the idea of a psychotic killer like Pinkamena, and a narcissistic mass murder like Rainbow Dash at each other's throat.

This is going to be awesome

7663533 Maybe, but it will take time. You can read some of my other work to keep yourself occupied if you want.

7218719 what is the 3rd most famous horror in the Brony community?

7747681 Probably Little Miss Rarity or Butchershy, it's a tie.

Hello Perfectly Insane,
i would just like to let you know.
I have seen many hate comments through out the comments of this story.
that most likely discouraged you.
i just want to say i enjoyed what is here.
You have at least one fan of this story.
:)

7942113 Then you'll be glad to know another chapter is in the works.

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Good to know:)

But she was eagerly speaking to the pony beside her, which was probably why she was happy. But what shook her wasn’t Fluttershy’s personality, it was who she was talking to. She was talking to a ghost, someone who shouldn’t be here, someone who shouldn’t be anywhere. Rainbow Dash.

She was normal, happy, even. She seemed to be laughing at something, probably a foal hood story only her and Fluttershy would know. There were no scratches or wounds on her body, nothing even remotely indicating she’d been tortured. Her wings were still intact, her cutie mark unharmed and still on her flank. Everything about her seemed normal, like nothing happened like their party never happen. And that both shook, and enraged Pinkamena. For once, she had no words or jokes. She had nothing to say or do, she could do nothing but stare.

This is fantastic, also I knew she was still around tougher than you thought Pinkamena.