if the chapter seems off, as in the beginning is crap, it's because a page of it was from half a year ago. but hey, i'm alive

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2293293 was wondering where you had gotten too

Welcome back from the dead, mate!

MAKE NIGHTMARE MOON A VILLIAN FOR THE PLOT OF STORY NAOW [Flutterrage]

2293940... she's the gatekeeper...
i can't do that...

TY~!!! I have been dreamin',
I've been waitin'
To read bout those great ponies.

2293962 think nightmare moon vanishes, she is inside tartarus, smells like evil to me

read entire fic in less than 7h

2373669 when I reread this... it took me 4...
i'm mad at myself for making the chapters so short, but I do plan on finishing this one...

2379331
i don't want to complain, but i do it anyways
1) chapter 24 is still at the beginning of chapter 25
2) where is the end?

2660753 I was going to delete that a while ago, but as I looked at it I was either lazy or realized that it's a good example of how much a one day's difference can change a chapter if I stop halfway through.
probably both
and I have no idea. I had half of it down somewhere but that somewhere is lost. I'll most likely finish it eventually though

2667969 I have no idea what the hell you're trying to say, either english isn't your first language or you're not the brightest

I wish Spike and Emerald had more character develop meant

3142498 read on, friend
he's not exactly a super main character but he has relevance just as all the characters do

so? what's up with the story?

3706926 no idea. wrote most of the last chapter once but I have no idea where that went, i don't want to cancel it one chapter off from the end though

4949234 dude that comment was from over a year ago lol

Anyone else notice that they are wearing Gears of War armor and using weapons from the same game in the cover pic.

6079727 it's because the cover pic is a gears of war crossover pic... It's stated in the description that the story itself is not a GoW crossover for that specific reason.
you're definitely not the first to notice that...

4952046 Maybe the one that wrote it waited a year :P

when is the next chapter?

good story,
I like part where twilight kick her dad into the wall, I love the comment her mom made,

You still alive Dark?