Part time writer, full time Stalker. Stalking here and over there, please return to 100 Rads bar if found drunk off my ass.
Micheal Smith, a young man who makes his living by thieving at night. However one night something he could never have even imagined happens and is given an opportunity he simply can't pass up.
The question is, what will happen to Equestria with his coming. Will Micheal resist the temptation of the darkness, or will he embrace it.
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Awesome love it
keep it going
good job.
nice chapter a tad bit short but hey its good suspense until the next chapter
Please tell me he'll be annoying the rest of the elements in the story?
It will be hilarious
7335794 There maybe moments where he'll mess with the Element bearers and others.
But in the near future there is "work" to be done.
I'll let your imagination run wild on that one.
this is great, 8 just keep going like this and you'll be in with the big shots in no time.
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Cheers for the support, but we shall see. We shall see.
Ooh... It apears he got a little carried away with the hunt last night.
This doesn't bode well.
7353711 oh piss posh, it's not that bad. sure he got a little carried away but I mean we only ever intend to eat a few chocolates but when you put your hand back into the box there's none there.
Interesting, i hope this will not bee a to short story.
Well that escalate quickly, and after next "job" things will bee hard for him.
Hmm if he gets captured get him to tell Celestia and or Luna a half truth say he is a two.souls trapped in one body. Or mind or what ever that he had no control of his actions since he found the dogs in the forest. Twoud be how I would bale out.
But serous stuff now LOVe~~ it.
7382921 it's too late for a bale now. He potentially killed one and maimed another of the main six
I don't think he will get off that easy.
7383403 true, but never know what their reaction will be.
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Read on friend, you may like the rest of the show. There might be a spanner thrown here or there through that could 180 anyone's position.
*puts hands up innocently* not that I'm suggesting anything.
Also thank you for pointing that out, change has been made.
You racist against farm ponies?
7742574 Seen, facepalmed, edited.
Cheers for the point out.
New chapter. NOW!!!
P.S.: Pwease?
Uh oh.....
I would not sign that fucking contract. He gets control of me at some point? Hell the fuck no.
I saw the cover art for this story and thought it was fucking Ornifex.
I believe the fecal matter has impacted upon the ceiling-mounted oscillating cooling device.
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Think that clause more along these lines.
"OH GOD EVERYTHING'S GOING SO FUCKING WRONG" *crying in corner*
Then Azmuun comes along and personally puppets the situation until:
A) It stabilises and he's no longer needed.
B) Even with his guidance the situation still turns out bad so he just pops smoke and bails.
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Picture your typical griff critter, but it's full avian in raven fashion. Bar the wings which are half feathered half bat, and having a tail about as long as the body ending with a blade that looks akin to the spartan swords from 300. That's sort of the jist of what I'm going for.
Not sure if it's working.
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Also sir, it's about 2 in a morning, you made me chuckle
Have a 612x408 cookie
So Necromancy?
I know it's probably not what she's implying but my knowledge of the arcane was only able to grasp that particular idea.
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Nah, Celestia using necromancy for just about any reason just doesn't seem right.
I will probably elude to the exact how later. Probably in a conventional non-dark arts field.
Eh we'll see, by the time we get to that stage I'll probably have cooked something twisted up.
Matter of fact I'm getting something now, and it's giving me one of those oh so sweet evil smiles.
7962418 Good to see that I have something to look forward too now. :)
Are you ever going to continue this story? I actually really liked it
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Ever so slowly the next chapter is being made.
But I work for a living so by the time I get home at the end of the day I'm pretty well exhausted and sore, on top of that I've been dealing with some medical bullshit that has my nerves on end. Meaning I effectively only write weekends, and that's if I haven't sleep half of the day away.
As of right now I'm trying to make the next chapter for the other fic, cause that hasn't been touch in over a year, and initially I intended to write them in parallel.
Long and short - Don't worry, story ain't dead, I'm just fucking slow.
Alright I understand, we all need time to relax after a hard days work.
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Sorry to say you may be waiting some time for that.
I'm going to try and release at least one more chapter for one of my stories before the end of the year. But work is burning me out, and production has been extremely slow.
love it!! if this is continuing, please, take your time! better to wait for good content than to rush for low-quality!!
We back baby let's go
YU-GI-OH!!!!!!!!!!
make more please
Aw man, I'm caught up already! Please continue this story, I absolutely love it!
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It's not badly written, but the character keeps making dumber and dumber decisions. Does he get any smarter as the story go on? There is only so long you can watch someone staggering around running on nothing but luck for so long before it just gets ridiculous.
Monk