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LightningThunda


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This story has been canceled for lack of interest in writing this story.
There is a low chance that I may continue the story, but at the moment I am not.
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Well, let's start with the obvious: I am a human from the world of humans... in a Chupacabra's body... in a new world. Shit well, at least it's a break from my extremely boring life of programming.

Ok, hold on let's do some introductions: my name is James and you are the reader for my story, nice to meet you.
Ok, so now that craps over let's start with what I am for I am not just any old myth, I am a super hyped up powerful myth with awesome fucking powers.
So how will I fare in this new world and how will the people/ponies (what...?) of it respond to a car-sized super powerful black wolf creature, they may or may not have seen before...?
Hopefully well...

-Edited by >>>>Inrix<<<< I need him, without him I would be dead...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 79 )

I will be watching.

Good but grammar/spelling is pretty bad, I suggest getting an editor.

Good. More please

5633327 Yes I know, I actually have an editor but he hadn't fully finished the first chapter and I didn't want to wait, will be releasing edited chapters now and will probably re-submit the first chapter when my editor is done with it.

5633804
Ok, first chapter has been updated to the edited version, all chapters after this will be edited before upload.
:pinkiehappy:

A few mistakes I noticed but other than that your good!

5646108 Cool, also if you're really interested you can be another editor. If my other editor takes a break for a few chapters (which he probably will, he's quite busy), I'll PM you about it.
Also, what mistakes where they, so I don't do them again?

5646112 Bah you don't have to worry about them they were minor (That and I'm too lazy to find them again!) Y'now I would accept yet my computer broke down recently and I believe it was a hard drive issue. I have to wait to get enough money to send it and I probably will accept when I get it back. So yeah I might do it but later. The editor job I mean.

Comment posted by Doomagedon deleted Feb 23rd, 2015

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Dammit now I have to finish editing it... :/

*Opens Itunes and GoogleDrive

Edit: Done, Now I just need to wait for Lightning :pinkiecrazy:
Edit2: ITS ALIVE

NEW CHAPTER NOW WITH COOKIES!

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Please don't tell me this is becoming a Displaced fic? That fad already ran it's course.

Hmm... I find this story highly intriguing. No daunting mistakes that I can find. Please keep writing! I look forward to reading more!

CHAOS COOKIES! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

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No not displaced, that, as you said, is dead.

5665121
hehe, that is a damn good idea. But no, not now. Still need him.

Keyword there: not now

Let me guess the mountain is smoking Because of James running

yay excellent as always write more soon

5668731 too meny writers are afraid of killing off characters glad you aren't

5668839
Planing to, though will be awhile, planing on releasing 3 chapters at once and that will take little time.

Brilliant story. I expect to see more of this when I wake up... Or else I'm going to summon the CMC and sick them on you!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

5683583
I hope you're still sleeping, I unfortunately have had internet problems and have not been able to access my Google doc for a while. Will release more AS soon as possible. Sorry for the wait.

i can only imagine twilights reaction when she gets home

(-)_(-) *Yawn

Even though I have had no time lately I felt like reading/editing... So huzzar new chapter :/

Close lies! Demon stares! Angry twilight!
a recipe for disaster if I ever read one!
more please!

“Ok, common big guy”.

It is written "Come on".
Common is usually used to describe something ordinary, usual, stantard, ordinary etc.
In that line you are describing him as a dime a dozen big guy, nothing special.

Like the story though :pinkiehappy:

"we must treat it with utmost respect, it is an extremely intelligent beast and can possibly be tamed if we really try to work with it. "
This sounds like slavery

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