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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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What about Shakespearicles? He did "Shining Armor Masturbates".

It helped that Cadance unerstood,

Understood

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Whyever would you be so antagonistic, dear sir?
JumbledThought already addressed the issue in a journal post, so please, let it be.

Seriously, guys... you're running out of ponies and repeating yourselves now :facehoof:
i.imgur.com/RBcR0gy.jpg

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I know. This actually wasn't planned.:rainbowlaugh:

a guy jacking it, despite me having written no gay clop yet

Implying that all guys who jerk off are gay, huh?

Wow.

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I read the thing (meh) and I have to agree, this doesn't really have gay in it. Shining Armor is not portrayed as being hot for other stallions. Actually, he's portrayed as being hot for Cadance, who is not R63'd in this story.

That's basically the opposite of gay.

6729144 Exactly. I found this one subpar, and to be honest, I liked the other Shining Masturbates by Shakespearicles better than this.

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And in my hour of darkness, she is, standing right in front of me. Speaking words of wisdom: Let it be. Let it be, let it be. Let it be, yeah let it be. Speaking words of wisdom, let it be.

Thank you, for helping me think of what I'm singing today.

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Y'know, you're alright, kid.:raritywink:

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this doesn't really have gay in it. Shining Armor is not portrayed as being hot for other stallions. Actually, he's portrayed as being hot for Cadance, who is not R63'd in this story.
That's basically the opposite of gay.

He author had one job goshdamn it! :flutterrage:
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*flips table*

Still though, this clopfic wasn't terrible but of the fact that Cadence wasn't rule 63'd to a stallion (Prince Eros or Prince Bolero) and this fic wanted Shining to be gay as fuck (which I'm all up for to be honest! :heart:) but seriously? No Prince Bolero or Eros? Ugh....very disappointing. :ajsleepy:

As an attempt goes this was... Passable? I think?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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6729117 This fic was not meant to have a gay Shining Armor. What the description means is that because I have never written anything for a gay audience, something that is targeted towards a gay audience, like focusing on a dude jerking it, seemed a little odd to me.

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Alright, come on guys. In the name of transparency, my story was waiting in the approval cue for a couple of days. I assume his was as well within the same time. The fact that they were published so close together is more indicative of who approved it first, rather than who wrote it first. In either case, it doesn't matter. Aside from the title, the two stories are nothing alike. They are both good for what they are for different reasons. And even if JumbledThought didn't like my story, I don't take it personally or begrudge him for it. I actually liked his story for what it is. What I don't like is these kind of petty nit-picks that do nothing more than artificially create vitriol between authors and readers. Like or dislike an author or story for its own merit.

6729737 I wasn't really "judging the story" as much as I was "Judging" the description, which said this was "the only" masturbation story about a guy. Which it is not. So your argument holds nothing to my statement.

6729748 When I wrote the description, it was the only one, and even after I knew of his story, I left it, as I hoped I would be published first.
6729737 And my dislike for your story is just not liking your story, not anything against you. As well as a wish that the premise had been seen to its full power. *shrug* I will admit that it was hot though.

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I apologize for the misunderstanding JumbledThought. :ajsleepy:

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Meanwhile, I'm still waiting for Tirek Masturbates. It seems that I'll have to write it myself...

6732169 Mac is still bigger than Tirek

Wait...does Shining just happen to be sleeping nude? No sign of underwear or clothes in general.

6729134 I think something like that exists already....

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