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Oldtakufanboy


Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

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6790826

Thanks. Hope you'll like the rest of it :twilightsmile:

6790845
ok am hook I what to see more of this

Looks awesome so far, can't wait to read the rest.:pinkiehappy:

6793473

Welcome aboard, my friend :raritywink:

This is awesome and you shoulds feel awesome.

Huh...for a second I figured the workout was inspired by Bill Nye. Never seen One Punch Man...
also I should point out that having him work with rarity is different. Don't really have an opinion on this yet...so I will keep reading.

6793473

Sorry for a late reply, but I'm glad that you like it :twilightsmile:

Well now, this is interesting. There may be a lot of stories with a humanized Chrysalis, but very rare are there stories like this with an EG universe Chrysalis. Would you be offended if I said that you're story has inspired a plot for my own EG Chrysalis story? (Because, you know, it's that good thus far.) :twilightsmile:

6803500

I'm an inspiration? :pinkiegasp: wow... I never expected that. I'm glad you like the story so far.

Now as for your chrysalis EG story, if it's going to be like mine, you might want to make some changes :duck:

6803598

Oh, naturally. The last thing I want to be seen as is a plagiarist. Which is why I'm willing to bide my time to wait and see how your story unfolds before committing to anything. :eeyup:

6803853

Oh ok.

The next chapter will be out as soon as possible.

Ok it's official I love this story :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart:

It's a bit wonky at points with the character interaction but I do like it.

6808132

Hehehe :twilightsheepish:

Glad you like it though

Awesome....... Awesome to the max :moustache:

That scene from tangled is still one of my favorite Disney moments.

6816903

Same here. That song has been in my head for a while now and I decided to put it into this chapter :raritywink:

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*My Opinion*

To me..... It seems a bit rushed

But you still get a like because I love *out there* shippings.

6821769

Sorry for it being rushed. I'm doing my best. :twilightsheepish:

either than that, glad you like it. :pinkiesmile:

Let's hope some jackass doesn't screw this up, or it can ruin their lives for a good looong time

Top shelf stuff here good buddy, its probably your best fic yet :pinkiesmile:

6846345
I mean that there are laws against Student-Teacher relationships such as the boyfriend and girlfriend types. That's also not counting the Statuary Rape law. That is if a couple has a minor and an adult than it's rape thing. Even if the adult in question is 18 and the minor is 16 or 17 it still counts. I think been a while since I read up on that. You might want to do the same.

Edit:
Also I the law is harsher if the relationship had sex in it. Which is where the Statuary Rape law comes into place

6847231

Ohhhh, thank you for clarifying.

Don't worry, their relationship will be secret :raritywink:

Luckily, Jim I have Jim over here, who was nice enough to help me around.

Typo, but pretty funny when you say it in a 'professional' voice.

6849014

Thank you for spotting that. Will fix that :pinkiesmile:

Bravo. Bravo. An excellent use of a rarely used version of a favored villainess. :rainbowdetermined2:

just wondering, will there be more to this?

Thank you for all the references, :pinkiehappy: I'm so happy you made this I could cry :applecry:

6856876

Nope. That's about it. If it comes to mind, I might make a sequel possibly...maybe :trixieshiftright:

All of the references remind me of product placement.
"Wow, I sure do love Dragon Ball Z, which can be watched on Netflix.com.

awwww its over :raritycry: oh well was still an awsome read :pinkiehappy:

You're a life savor.

savior or saver?

"see you tomorrow, Jim,"

Capitalize.

The Zecora part could use some working on. Story wise that is it was a bit weak. I kinda need to see them falling in love but I find it hard to see why Jim falls in love with her for another reason other than her beauty. I am also a bit eeh on the relations with the main characters but mostly because it's not shown how they came to be.

This is going good. Good. I like it.

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