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Aetherpony


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Zecora shipping perhaps? Don't see much of that.

Two things already that probably should be edited.

First: First line One month has come and gone since that moment in time. Sixty days
Unless time is funky, it should either be two months or thirty days.

Second: P0nyville multiple times
Shouldn't it be ponyville, you've replaced the o with zero (0).

I don't really edit, but those were kinda glaring. I'll go back to reading and enjoying this series.

Tyhe sequal is up already. You my good sir are awesome.
It seems that you have a lot planned for Anon in this story, if the dexcription is anything to go by. Really looking forward to reading more of this story.
I hope that the draconequus that comes back is Eris. She and Anon make a good couple, and it would be sweet if you build on that.
On that note, it seems that he has a knack for getting the females of that world to like him. Eris, Pinkie, and now Zecora. I wonder how that is going to play out. I also wouldn't be surprised if more girls end up with crushes on him.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

"Aetherpony has posted a new story called..."

Me: :pinkiehappy:

*clicks*

"This story has been marked as having adult content..."

I liked that last story of yours, but if there's gonna be clop and stuff like that, I think I'll just go.

(also, you misspelled "adventures".)

what happened with applejack?! i don't have time to read the first story:applejackunsure:

Wow, i find it funny how I'm surprised just how better the story looks when compared between fimfiction and pastebin side by side....:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you very much. I'm surprised at the following this is getting.
When I left for a few hours, then came back to 30 notifications I thought I got featured for a second there. :pinkiegasp:

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I could always compromise. The clop itself does nothing to advance the plot(lol I said plot).
What I could do is list in parenthesis when the clop will begin and where it will end so that way you can just skip over it and pretend it fades to black.
I honestly don't like losing readers over something as small as a saucy scene.
I understand that it's supposed to be cute cartoon ponies being cute, but, well, this particular arc is adult themed.
Also fixed the mistake, took me a minute to see what letter I forgot :rainbowderp:

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Basically, while Applejack was Liarjack, she convinced Big Macintosh that Anonymous was trying to rape her.
That ended up in a fight that nearly killed Anonymous. So he still harbors feelings of hatred despite AJ being cured and Big Mac making amends.

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I'll admit that while my pastebin has a much larger amount of views than my fimfic, by no means is the quality better.
Though I might rework Applerape like I did Living the Good Life so I can post it here too.
Don't know if it'll garner the following like the other grimderps out there, but it'd be funny to see how the people here react to it :twilightsheepish:

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It's not as much to do with that as it is with the mature rating in general. I rarely, if ever, have that filter on because I always feel guilty afterwards (For the sake of not revealing my true age, let's just say I'm a bit young to read that stuff). So yeah, this kind of locks me out of this story when the last one was perfectly fine.

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I'm not saying that the Mature rating on this particular story is bad, per se, I'm just saying it would have been nice to have kept in mind either your younger readers or the people who just don't want to read that stuff from the last story.

(Yes, I will admit I'm sounding a tiny bit entitled, I just needed to blow some steam, OK?)

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I honestly don't know the age range of my audience.:twilightoops:

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You said that this story won't update as fast as good life... so do you mean a chapter every week or so?

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Chapters 1-4 will be updating daily.
The rest will be as... well... as I write them. :applejackunsure:

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DAMN IT AETHER, STOP WRITING SMUT

THINK OF THE CHILDREN

Also,
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>Though I might rework Applerape like I did Living the Good Life so I can post it here too.
>Don't know if it'll garner the following like the other grimderps out there, but it'd be funny to see how the people here react to it

Yes
Yes
YES
WANT :rainbowwild:

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oh good... scared me there for moment:pinkiehappy:

out of curiosity, is this story going to be as long as Good Life?

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Probably longer actually. I'm thinking this will probably be around 30 chapters or so.
Anon's going to be doing quite a lot. As will Chrysalis, the Gryphon King, and Prince Blueblood.
Discord's going to be doing his own branch of fun as well.

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Yea, should of said format but yea i get what you mean.....

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Yeah... the greentext format as well. Where interpretation is left more to the reader.

Well lets see, its looks like that Pinkie, Zecora and possible Mocha had an eye in Annon, interesting, I'm glad that Celestia accept him, tell me, if he was proclaim a hero, does that means that there is a statue of him or at least a image of him in one of the castle windows?

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Not as of yet, that comes later on... spoiler.
As of now he's renown throughout Equestria.

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So, he gets a statue? You know, for some moments I thought of Celestia wanting to be a little more involve in his life, after all she felt, the fact that he basically condemn his world to save her and her world and of course, his past that she may, or may not discover…Yeah I was thinking her mothers instinct will just kick in full force and just don't leave her. Like a mother seeing a baby cry and crawl throw sharp rocks or something, and not just a huge, but then again I bet you had something in store for that

I haven't read the first one yet, I will do soon though! Anyways, as for now I'm liking the look of this so far! =)

Men Big Mac have to inform Annon quick, he is already mad, he will go ballistic if suddenly all the mares want to screw his bones out. Plus it will be interesting a change of pace that instead of the human running from a bunch of horny mares, he and others stallions seack refuge and establish some friendship.

I really was hoping that this was the last we will see of Discord and his daughters, oh well there is nothing that can be done

Hmm. This is odd. You have a season one senario happening in season two. Unless you messed with the timeline.
Also, Big Mac was totally going to say bunker.

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Oh I totally messed with the timeline. I made it my pretty little beeeutch! :trollestia:

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Oh no I wasn't joking. I was being serious when I said I messed with the timeline.
I was just trying to convey it in a way that was meant to be funny. Hence the "Beeutch" comment.

What do they want with him, indeed. I look forward to discovering these unanswered questions!

Men i really hoped the main 6 and Celestia aid him. He had living with them for far to long, he never had attend something to harm. He is good friends with all of them, they will not leave him, in his time of need, specially Pinkie and Dash.
Damm Eris, she just ruin everything I really hoped this is the last we will see of her

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You can't tell me what to do Thewatcher509. My comments are only dictated by god and his admins!
:pinkiehappy:

Eris needs to learn some responsibility. If Anon forgives her, he's got a lot of work cut out for him trying to undo 1,000+ years of no consequences.

Explain me, how is his home work. Did he is leaving in some secret chaotic room in the castle while there are building his home? Or his home is ready but he has to enter Twilights home and into the bed to enter and escape his home? I'm confuse.

Also, I'm with Annon with the incentive, I prefer a 1000 times, Zecora or Pikie over Eris, she pretty much blow every possibility when she mess with his head. Friends can, but other than that, that bridge is complete burn.

Also, Zecora will appear next chapter?

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