Bravo. Bravo. An excellent use of a rarely used version of a favored villainess.

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You're welcome
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just wondering, will there be more to this?

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[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zsqqssNMTaA]

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Nope. That's about it. If it comes to mind, I might make a sequel possibly...maybe

awwww its over oh well was still an awsome read

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Glad you liked it

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Glad you like it

Tears of joy streamed down my face. Thank you so much for this, mate.

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Your welcome

6858145 *Glomps you with tears in my eyes* Thank you for being awesome.

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*hugs back*

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I love that movie. It's a classic
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This is the fourth time I've accidently stubled onto your work. I'd like to say I think your writing is getting better! Remember practice practice practice! Oh and now I want a sequal to this.

i knew he was gonna get her because all the stories like this happen with them getting the girl

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I just did

Wow this is the BEST HUMAN CLOPFIC I HAVE READ

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Thanks

I gotta be honest, this isn't very well written. Chryssi seems out of character, there's bad pacing, clumsy dialogue, irrelevant details, and homophone confusion. That said, practice makes perfect, and I'm sure you'll improve if you keep it up.

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7196680 Yeah, it is a little rough around the edges. Though on Chryssi being out of character, I thought about that.

We don't see much of her in the show beyond her acting out her evil plan. A plan she hatched because of her responsibilities and possibly driven by the hardship of her subjects. Here she is put in the situation of a relatively carefree life of a teacher just a few years out of college. Who knows how she would act? I would guess she'd be more abrasive, but honestly, that's personal. We don't know her, the way we know, for instance, Twilight. So I see it more as artistic license than out of character.

Anyway regardless of the interpretation of Chryssi or the rough edges, I did enjoy it quite a bit!

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Princess Jellyfish reference

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Well! No sh*t, Sherlock! That's the entire point of them exiting!...

I'm sorry, that was harsh. Still, that's their point.

This was cute, but the many anime references and the unnecessary Tangled reference threw me off. It's still pretty damned cute, but I'm just not one for anime. Still, ya did good!

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