Chapter 7: Ambush
Spike was in complete shock as Rarity kissed him. Though it wasn’t long kiss, just simple peck. It still caught him off guard. “Rarity?”
“I sorry, for being so blind dear, I should of realize sooner that there is only one other who just generous as me,” said Rarity, as she took of the cloak off, “And might I say darling, this is lovely dress that you made for me,”
“Well I was just trying to be a good Secret Santa, I gave everypony a good present, something that, that pony would want the most,” said Spike,
“Yes, darling, but--” said Rarity as she wrapped her hoof around his shoulder,
“But what?” said Spike, as he started to blush massively from her closeness to him,
“I didn’t get what I wanted most,” said Rarity as she grabbed his claw with her other hoof,
“And that is?” said Spike,
“To have a dance with a true gentle--” Rarity lean close and whisper into his ear, “dragon,”
“What--” said Spike, as she pulled him away from the map, so they could dance properly.
The two danced across danced all across the room. At first she was leading, but then he started lead, as she lean her face into his chest. Rarity could hear Spike heart beating faster, as her's was doing the same. Rarity and Spike were enjoying every minute of it, as they danced.
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Back at the Party everypony was having a great time as the music started to play. Everypony was on the Dance floor, except for Rarity and Spike. And yet everypony had found a dancing partner. Applejack was dancing Caramel, Rainbow Dash was flying through the sky line with Soarin. Big Mac and Cheerilee were enjoying their first dance after their engagement hours ago. Even Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich had put their party cannons away long enough to dance.
Everypony was enjoying themselves. Everypony except for Twilight as Flash was still gone. She knew he would be back for Heartwarming Day. But still she was there alone while everypony else was enjoyed dancing with a close friend or a loving spouse.
Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Knock, knock--
“Oh, no, it’s the Master!” said Doctor Whooves, as he jumped in front of Derby, with his screwdriver out.
“Will you put that away?" said Derby, as she held her hoof in front of him. “You’re making the other guest stare,” and indeed she was right, there was some of the other guest staring.
Meanwhile Twilight went answered the door. “It’s probably just a late guest,” said Twilight, as she opened the door, only to be shocked by who was there. “FF… Flash, you’re here!” she instantly wrapped her hooves around her husband.
“I will take that you missed me,” said Flash,
“Yes,” said Twilight, as she pulled him into a kiss.
“Alright I missed both of you as well,” said Flash,
“Oh yeah, I received the proper result today and our foal is going to be a filly,” said Twilight, as she let go of him, “How did you get here, I thought all the trains had left already and that you wouldn’t get back in time until tomorrow,”
“Actually I received a letter containing an early ticket from a ‘Secret Santa’,” said Flash,
“A letter? Let me see that letter,” said Twilight. He gave her the letter. She looked through it. “That sneaky dragon,” said Twilight, as she read the writing.
******
Back in the map room where Spike and Rarity were dancing. Rarity began to look back on other things about Spike that she may have been blind to. Realizing with each passing moment, that this whole time she had been waiting for the perfect stallion, her ‘Shining Knight’ when her perfect ‘Shining Knight’ was right in front her. Wrapped in scale armor, Spike was the one she had been waiting for. He was generous, loyal, strong, and had a good sense of fashion.
“Spike, I want to do something,” said Rarity, as she lifted her head.
“What?” said Spike, as they stopped dancing.
Rarity place her hooves on his face. Then she lean in as she pulled him closer to her. Their mouth met once again but this it was not a simple peck like last time. This one was longer, as she realized something more in that moment. Her feeling for Spike that developed over the years was not simply a liking for Spike, or a passing fancy. It was love, true love.
As they separated, “Rarity? That was incredible,” said Spike,
“Now I know I’m in love with you, Spike,” said Rarity, as she laid her head of his shoulder, and place her hooves around his shoulders.
“What did you say?” said Spike, “This isn’t because I gave this dress because I only did that to be generous,”
“Spikey, do not dare assume this is because of the dress, darling; although it is lovely and I will be asking about how you got so good at making dresses later, dear; But for now I want hear you say it,” said Rarity, as she lifted her head.
“Say what?” said Spike,
“The words that you have want to say since day you first met me,” said Rarity, as she lean her head closer again.
“I love you, Rarity,”
“And I love you Spike,"
This time Spike pulled Rarity for another kiss. Rarity was pushing more even more, as Spike did the same. This kiss was more passionate, and last even longer. Seconds felt like minutes, minutes felt like hours.
Meanwhile Sweetie Belle walked by the map room and noticed Spike and Rarity kissing. Behind them on the map was the mistletoe. “Hmm,” said Sweetie Belle, as an idea popped in her head. Then while the two were still kissing she used her magic to pull the mistletoe to her. Once it was with her, she giggle and looked back at them. “You enjoy yourself, Rarity, while I go enjoy myself,” Sweetie Belle whispered, as she walked away. “Oh Button Mash, could you come over here,”
******
“Spikey,”
“Yes, Rarity,”
“This is a lovely Tradition, let’s do it every year,”
“What? the Secret Santa Tradition, or the Mistletoe Tradition,”
“Both,”
******
Indeed this Heartwarming was going to be great. Everypony and dragon in Ponyville got exactly what they wanted from their Secret Santa. And every year from then on was that much better, especially now that there were two Secret Santas, Spike and Rarity.
******
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nice little story (missing a few words here and there) thank you.
Aww ... Button Smash doesn't know what is in stock for him hehe - evil laugh - I really enjoyed this story
6752463 Well I did do this complete without any help from a Proofreader. But I wanted to get it done before Christmas Break. And I still had fun a the same.
I think I did alright for my first Sparity.
P.S. I am loving these pics.
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ya did gud 
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6753623 Yeah I will probably go back after Christmas, and fix all the mistake I missed.
This story had all of my ships in it that's a rare thing and I loved every moment of this story
6755377 Well I was wanting to make this very special for my first Heartwarming story. So I figured I could try to work on pulling all my favorite ships in either big or small scene. Unfortunately I couldn't pull in all my favorites, just the ones in Ponyville.
Which shipping scene did you like the most?
6755584 oooh that's a toughie... My favorite part would have to be Sweetie Belle's attempts to get Button Mash under the mistletoe.
I approve of all the ships in this story. although I would have preferred fluttermac.
6981663 Well I wasn't able to get all my favorite ships into this story, but I got most of them. I got another story planned sometime later maybe in April or May, that will pull in some ships that I used in story as well some my favorite ships in Canterlot.
6981663 Oh I forgot to ask which shipping scene did you think was the best.
6981975
Not sure which scene but I loved FlashLight.
6983060 I was just curious on which ship I handled best.
6983070 Oh witch one you handled best? Sparity obviously was handled well. You could have done a bit better with the other ships primarily Soarin, Cheese, Caramel, and Button. I suggest doing a story for each of them. It gives more depth to them that is really needed.
6983121 What was wrong with Cheese? I thought I handled it well. I mean I know the problem with Caramel ship and Soarin ship. All I did was just mention them. But what was wrong with the Cheese Pie ship
6983153 I feel like he was still left a little hollow.
6983422 Well I guess, all he got in was one line.
6983467 Exactly and even flash could have used a bit more development.
6983548 Well hopefully I can do better next time I pull this multiple ships idea again later. Next time will be in a story called 'Everything For The Ages'. Which again will have a Sparity ship but also giving some better looks at Flashlight, as well as a few of the ships that I couldn't pull off here. I plan to do it sometime in April or May, or possibly June or July. Depending when I get done with my other stories, 'The New Stallion', Cold Vlight, and 'Endless Time Or Forever End'.
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The story was great and had just those few things to improve on. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future.=
6984065 Alright then, I'm glad it was a good story. There will a little less ships in the next one, but I will still try to improve.
7123012 Well.... there two reasons why the grammar is simple awful. 1: I did the entirety of this in 5-6 days with very little sleep so I could get out for Christmas. and 2: As you can tell I didn't use a proofreader at all.
But in all retrospect when first posted this it looked a hell a lot worse. And since the first posting I been trying to fix it. Truth be told I thought you like the story purely on everything except for the grammar(That's what the others seem to have done). And the basic fact is I've actually gotten a hell lot better since this story. I mean just skim through any of my later stories and you'll notice my writing has gotten better.
The reason I tell you this now is because when I first gave you the link I thought it still looked fine to read. That is until roughly two hours ago when I went to read it again myself(Like I do every once in a while). I realized I could barely get pass chapter one
. But after chapter one the grammar isn't that bad.
8017699 Well, to each it own. I could see them working as a couple, but only if they put they rivalry aside. And that in lies problem. We like these two working so closely because of rivalry they have. In doing so I can't really ship them. But you go ahead and enjoy your ship while I enjoy mine.
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LOL, probably because of the cool and interesting idea! :)
8610506
Hmm, I guess that makes sense. Either way, I'm glad you got some enjoyment out of it.
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Thanks! :)
8611802
Nice! :3
2 onlookers watching the lovers say.
1. They are so perfect for eathother. I am so glad the gun jammed.
2. Yeah,the gun did jam and he did not miss her 8 times.