Starting Anew

A teenage boy with a broken heart and a lonely bully with a hole in her own cross paths.

This is a humanized Spike x Diamond Tiara story in which both characters are aged up. Spike being 19, and Tiara being 17.

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Chapter One: A Helping Hand · 18th Jul 2014 · 1,646 words
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Chapter Two: Distractions · 18th Jul 2014 · 1,568 words
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DragonPony

DragonPony #1 · Jul 18th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

I am happy to see it is back and kicking again. To be honest Spike is better then me,how much Rarity was pissing me off I would have dropped the cart and told her to carry it herself. It will be interesting if their ages come into play in this version. Even though is is only slightly older that age difference could make a world of difference. It would be cute to see him waiting for her to be let out of class so he can go hang out with her. If they wear a uniform I would crack up if he like seeing her in it and she notice and tease him about it. There are alot of things can be done with these two characters and I can't wait to see what you do

MrShortcake

MrShortcake #2 · Jul 18th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

4716187 Dude, the fact that you're actually excited means more to me than you could know. I'm definitely going to enjoy writing this story, and I'll be damned if I disappoint anybody generous enough to give it a chance. I f*cking love you glorious bastards!

Arby

Arby #3 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 3 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

I look forward to this with some sadness because Sparity OTP but it seems like it could be good.

MrShortcake

MrShortcake #4 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

4716223 H-hey, fancy meeting you here. While I am a little put off by how quickly those three downvotes over there came in, I am more than inspired by the fact that such incredible users have given it a chance. I really can't stress how much it means to me seeing you here. (I don't play favorites, but hnng~)

UltiXevoz

UltiXevoz #5 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

This is pretty good so far. It has potential.

Arby

Arby #6 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

4716330 I can seeeee you like Hail Mary. x3 It's always nice to see the little connections here. This idea sounds really good; the first chapter was enjoyable so watched and fav'd.

DARKPHANTOM13

DARKPHANTOM13 #7 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 5 · · Chapter One: A Helping Hand ·

Glad to see this story back up and running. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

DARKPHANTOM13

DARKPHANTOM13 #8 · Jul 20th, 2014 · 5 · · Chapter Two: Distractions ·

Everything seems good. Though I could see some tension between Spike and the CMC if he starts hanging out with DT. Especially if DT decides to keep her grudge against the CMC.

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