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The cutest couple in all Ponyville have their first fight. Will it end their relationship? Will it make their relationship better? And will anypony get some sleep this morning? Wait...... what?
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That was pretty funny!
7214670 I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This was so awesome!
Nice. A little scattered and doesn't really go anywhere, but entertaining none the less.
A pie in the oven! Hilarious!
Also, Rarity cheating on Thunderlane with Spike, that was awesome, I don't know what's funnier, that I ship Sparity or that Thunderlane is very injured
7214730 Yeah I really couldn't find a good spot to end. So I took it as far as I could without breaking the idea.
7214766 Truth be told I had consider at one point killing Thunderlane. But I figure that would take the joke too far. Plus I've already killed him in two other stories. So I just wounded him in this one.
7214704 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
7214766 My OC would be like: THUNDERLANE IS MIIIIINNNE!!!! I DECLARE WAR ON YOU, BLOSSOMFORTH!!
7214804
Blossomforth isn't in this story..
I wigged out at the part with Thunderlane, so I hit my head on my pillow at full force and gave myself a nosebleed.....
7214813 EEEEEEEXactly.
XD I wuv this story!
7780246 Well thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to like and favorite.
7780262 Well if I like it I star it
7780351 Well again thank you. There is only so many that seemed to do both. And a writer like me needs all the help I can get.
7780425 XD I star all the stories I decide to stalk lol
Are there any sex jokes, or actually sex in this?
8260209
They are naked through the fic so any jokes of that nature are needed. Hence a few sex jokes are needed.