>Sees non-grimdark MacBloom clopfic in new stories list

>yus

>after reading this

>2short4me

Seriously?! What's so hard to find a damn good non-grimdark MacBloom clopfic that's not so damn short nor lackluster?!

In a more serious note, I feel that the writing is weak, the clop itself even in a very short one-shot fetish-y things are kinda barebones and lots of improper paragraph use. I was so looking foreward to a short yet sweet clopfic of one of my favourite MLP incest pairings next to Twining (depending on my mood that is. ) but alas I guess I'll just have to keep waiting.

6685093
Well first off, I apologize that this story shot down your expectation
In my experience, an I say this with all due respect, but you've written several good stories. So if you are unable to find a none grim or dark MacXBloom, then why not write it yourself? Set the standard instead of waiting for others.

6685130

It's quite alright. No need to worry about my expectations.

why not write it yourself? Set the standard instead of waiting for others.

You're kinda right. I mean, I have written a Diamond Tiara/Prince Blueblood clopfic before. I'm sure I'll be able to write a really good MacBloom clopfic some time in the future.

6685152
I would greatly enjoy it
I understand the feeling of wanting to read a certain ship and not finding it anywhere.

The character's name is Apple Bloom. Two words, not one.

I quite enjoyed this! I saw a few grammar errors, but overall thought it was a good story.

So many spelling errors! Which is too bad, since the idea seems fun. A little editing might go a long way!

The world needs more applecest.