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The First and the Last

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Pegos 1-1

Pegos 1-1 #1 · Mar 17th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Well then... That was... Something

Dragonhunter

Dragonhunter #2 · Mar 17th, 2014 · · 1 ·

So, I obly have one real gripe, and it's that their dicks touched. Uh, no. That's not actually my concern, never mind. It's that this story is pretty rushed, and spent a good 3/8 on basically describing pony islam. This story actually had pretty good potential, but was not worth.

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