Discord has gone evil again thanks to Tirek and now the only way to prevent him spreading chaos and havoc on Equestria, somepony must marry him. It's either he chooses the mare or she comes out of her own free will. What happens when a certain purple alicorn accepts the deal?
Did the princess of love get into a fight with her husband? Ooooh. Stuff's gonna go down! Can't wait. >:)
6767154 I thought that in order to make people see they're not perfect ALL the time, I thought I could try that out
6767460 It's smart. I'm really interested to see what will happen next. Good luck with the next chapter.
6767609 thanks. It'll take awhile to think up the next chapter because that chapter took FOREVER to write!
6767641 I know how that is. Sometimes it takes FOREVER to think of what you want to write. Don't worry though, whatever you write will be great.
6769564 thanks. I'll try to make it with my own style and not TOO much like Bride of Discord.
Twicord version of bride of discord. I haven't read that fan fiction since I stopped shipping fluttercord due to reasons...but a fluttercord and twicord version of a popular story. you solved all shipper of fluttercord and twicord conflicts. Why do I not think of these things...
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So this is an Twicord on Bride of Discord? I'm spit on that story but I'll track this to see if you fix the thing wrong in Bride of Discord.
6784150 and that would be? This LOOSELY based on Bride of Discord! You people are reading my comments!
6789835 Sorry
6789842 you are forgiven. Now, what do you mean by "the issue with BOD?" And choose your words VERY CAREFULLY
6789852 Well I said this in both my review on the story which you can find on the Fluttercord grouo and my true thoughts on my blog. But to sum it up the spacing there was none, Fluttershy got over her stage fight in a few minutes but it took three years to get over Discord abd there could have been more romance in that story. Because the only real thing they did together was the date and a picknet that doesn't really scream truelove.
6789894 it all depends on how you look at it
7203045 I'm trying to but it's really hard because of my stupid writers block.
7208141 how many times do I gotta say it, THIS STORY IS ONLY BRIEFLY BASED ON BRIDE OF DISCORD!
7820454 thanks, glad you enjoyed it
It's really good. Keep it up
Good concept, but the chapter itself seems very simplistic and not fleshed out enough. Also, the dialogue doesn't seem natural. Delve deeper into their emotions, use more creative description and add more suspense to the plot. I like the idea, and the basic jist of the mane 6's reactions seem right, but it really needs to be expanded on to be on par with bride of Discord. All in all, good start, but lots of room to improve.
very nice
Wow, that Pace is just so incredibly fast .
I am genereally all for Twilight Discord stories, but I feel a bit slower pace might make things more understandable.
Can’t wait for more.
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I'm trying to keep this at a shorter pace, which is exactly why once she tells Cadance and Shining will be a week from then.
Repetition bro its not helping. Your clearly stating that your trying to keep rarity in character but are too different from her to keep up appearances. And are obviously not good at being rarity in general despite a noticeably failed attempt at keeping said character in line. It kind of makes you look desperate to act like her
This story’s really cool! Are you planning to continue it?
Well shit, he died