Twilight is having nightmares. But once the mare in her dreams threatens her, she finds it hard to sleep. Her friends try to help her, but once Discord gets involved they'll find that this isn't a nightmare but corruption They team up to stop this night-mare, but it turns out even the draconaquus may not be a match for this ever lasting enemy.
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Good story.
nice i like it
#HailDiscord
#DiscolightRules!
Thankbyou
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6714712 thanks
Aaaaaaawww my goood
So sweet
I love this
So excited for more ^^
6783284 Thanks, I tried my best, I really appreciate it. Trying to improve with the imagery,
6713775 thanks I appreciate it
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I like the concept but, yaaah...you really need an editor for this. Don't get me wrong! I love the story and plot, it's just some aspects really threw me off the story. Its great and all just needs some rounding off and touching up and you're good to go!
next chapter please.
I really like this story, you're a good writer and you portray the characters perfectly! Though it does need some edits to the grammar.
I also noticed that you sometimes capitalize entire sentences and, to me at least, it takes away from the story rather than adds to it. Just capitalizing one or two words might work better.
There are also a few author's notes in parentheses throughout the first chapter that could be put at the end or at the start of the chapter, in the actual author's notes.
But that's just my advice, you can do whatever you want!