Our Deal

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'King' Sombra keeps coming back from the dead and the only way to get rid of him is to make a deal. Will the newest princess be able to handle the deal?

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 26th Dec 2015 · 1,085 words
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Chapter 2 · 11th Jan 2016 · 1,057 words
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Author's note · 27th Dec 2016 · 318 words
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Necron Lord

Necron Lord #1 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

a bit of a fast pace for the opening but im liking the idea of (non-sex) slave Twilight. keep it up

goaway

goaway #2 · Dec 27th, 2015 · · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

6772576

(non-sex)

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Pfft. Not reading this now.

Necron Lord

Necron Lord #3 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

6772607 I only say non-sex since there is no sex tag ... YET
Plus it's only the first chapter so-
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goaway

goaway #4 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

I did read it, and I quite enjoyed it. As 6772619 said, it's a little bit rushed, but there's always time for detail later.

TwilightXLuna

TwilightXLuna #5 · Dec 28th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Great first chapter can't wait for the next keep up the great work

Shadow of doubt

Shadow of doubt #6 · Mar 16th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I love it, so far it is interesting hmm I would love it if he forced her to read and perform dark magic just to spite Celestia

Star Pen

Star Pen #7 · Mar 30th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Nightmare Moon Returns

Nightmare Moon Returns #8 · Apr 30th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Shadow of Doubt I love that idea and remember Dark magic corrupts those who use it so if Sombra wanted to break her that's one way.

Ratmandango

Ratmandango #9 · Jun 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Well... that was blunt.

King Sombra Returns

King Sombra Returns #10 · Jul 25th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

7035021 Interesting idea, It seams like something Sombra would do. Also 7174357 That is true Dark magic would take over her mind, turning her slightly dark Sounds like he can kill two birds with one stone.

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