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They didn't come from this world, but it's now their new home. The classes try their best to fit in in the new place, but it's not as easy as it seems. From learning new things to falling on old habits, everypony's got work to do...

A sequel to My Little Fortress: Teamwork is Magic

Chapters (8)
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Keep up the good work mate

Sweet! Been looking forward to this and it's just as good as your last story.

+1 thumb and track

This is very interesting,
I Demand MOAR.

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

OH SWEET SAMUEL JESUS THIS IS GETTING GOOD! WOOO~~ Cannot wait for the next awesome installment, but now I am worried, if Hale knows that means others will know... Others that will hurt them... *Begins calling in bodyguards from his Craftworld* FETCH THE DIRE AVENGERS!

I have been waiting for this for so long! CUE NERDGASM!!!! :rainbowkiss: :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry: :derpytongue2:

Awesome ending!

I'm gonna like this one a lot, can't wait for the next part!

NO FREAKIN WAY! I wish I was the scout. Hes too cool. I mean its like putting this :rainbowkiss: and this :flutterrage: togeator. What do you get? A scout. Or sniper. 2 fav classes there! Anyway nice one keep it up! Whats that pony have on his neck? DOGTAGS!

252461 Hale is the Manliest Man in the universe and he loves mlp. Do you really think he would allow someone to harm them?

Yes! YES!! YES!!! YES!!!!
I've been waiting forever for this sequel!
When will the next chapter come out?

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It might take a couple weeks, seeing as school has come down on me like a ton of bricks. :fluttershysad:

This i good, i like this.

-WW/-CB

Rated, tracked, and now commented! Great work!

Saxton Hale is friends with Celestia... Why am I not surprised? However I gotta say, the letters idea was brilliant. I can't wait for more!

I've never really been into fanfiction due to a very apathetic view of reading, but I can really get into crossovers when I know both sides well enough. I've read the prequel story to this one, and it really does feel like a continuation. The characterization can throw me off a bit, but for the most part I like all of it that I see. There were several parts that make me laugh, and Hale's relationship with Celestia seems perfectly reasonable if not just perfect. If nothing else, I'd say this story has potential to be great, and I'll certainly be standing by to see the results.

This is just awesome, thats all I can really say about it. Keep up the good work.

Soilder needs to join the royal guard and whip em into shape! That would be funny as hell!!

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I'm not gonna say anything except keep an eye out. ;)

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Thats just a mean teaser right there, just plain mean.

Very swell. I just wanted to know if you were busy though becasue I've been waiting for about 3 weeks and I get a meduim chapter. Don't take it harsh. I've never been busy with more than one storie though. Good story, really like it. I hope for more. Godspeed and goodluck.

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It took a while due to a very awful mixture of procrastination, schoolwork, and writer's block. It's a smoothie of awful-ness that kept pushing this back. I'll try to be a bit more punctual next chapter

That's... nice.
Umm, I'm just not sure how I feel about this chapter. Maybe I'll reread it later.

That was great! Can't wait till the next chapter!

goddammit, i hate when people mispronounce sammich XD

Found a few errors:
"Heavy slowly raised his hand."
Ummm, think ya mean "hoof."
"Don't want your getting worse."
Looks like you just accidentally hit the R key.

Otherwise, good chapter. A couple laughs, a daww and some good plot-building.

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I try to proofread, but it looks like I missed a few. I'll fix 'em pronto

That ending was so heart-warming :ajsmug:
Excellent story thus far, looking forward for more!

please continue writing xD deffinatley a story worth reading and a brilliant sequel to your team fortress one :moustache:

Job time!:pinkiecrazy:

Scout already as a male...lion? Malestallion?
Heavy operating his own Restaurant.
Now for the others...

Pyro and Demo, like you said, maybe they could work as a fireworks team? Or the literal demo team from time to time.
Medic... I feel like he would work with Nurse Redheart but thats just kinda funneling into place i guess.
Spy... hmm... Maybe assist Rarity at Carousel Boutique?
Sniper... Painter? Artist maybe? No idea...
Ms. Pauling... another weather mare like RD maybe?
Engineer... Architect?
Soldier... I think maybe follow one of the previous comments on where he joins the army. Or a construction worker? ... Nope, that would end in disaster...

MY HEAD, IT BURNS.:fluttercry:

562770 Ms Pauling could be an accountant

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All will be revealed in good time, my friend. No spoilers for ya, that would make the wait not worth it. :scootangel:

565302 True but it's kinda fine to speculate eh?:derpyderp2:

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Speculation is fine. Heck, I love speculation. It means people are trying to figure out what happens next, which means you care about the story.

so the sequal does exsist!
YAY!:yay:
ok, i can't read what's here right now, because i need to sleep, but I WILL RETURN!:flutterrage:
this gonna be good!

Scout folded his arms..........
LE GASP
DARN YOU PONY PHYSICSSS! :pinkiegasp:

LOL, Equestira hold-em. And Soldier swam all the way there for a bagel! That's AWESOME!

I rate this :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

If Soldier would do that for a bagel, I shudder to think what would happen if someone stole Heavies sandvich. :twilightoops:

You should write a scene based on the events of the War comic. The whole thing is about friendship.

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I have a reference to the friendship in an upcoming chapter, don't you worry.

SOLDIER CROSSED THE OCEAN. FOR A BAGEL.

You know, I can actually see him doing this. :rainbowlaugh:

That ending can be interpreted very differently, or maybe I'm just a sick fuck. Wait. This is the Internet... We're all sick fucks!

Where'd you get all the names?

And Soldier swimming for a bagel is completely in character!

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I made 'em up. Well, most of them. A few I borrowed the name of something related and tweaked a few letters. (Like Eryx, The Antelope queen= Oryx, a type of antelope)

Soldier... Y U SO FUNNEH???

I seriously lol'd at his response. Also, is it wrong for me to imagine him as an Earth pony version of that Steroids Pegasus in "Hurricane Fluttershy" (which I hope to see again in a future episode)?

This is fantastic! One of the funniest chapters yet!

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