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TLiving Darkness
MLP: FiM
Team Fortress
Adventure
Drama
Slice of Life
a crossover with Team Fortress 2.
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Spike
Zecora
Derpy
Main 6
vildtiger · 426k words · 73 9 · 2.9k views
EHeritage
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Random
what if Spike was never meant to have wings? what if he was a different kind of dragon? and what if he met those dragons?
Second Person
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Rarity
Spike
OC
vildtiger · 14k words · 20 7 · 1.2k views

Jan

20th

2018

what makes a story interesting · 12:09pm Jan 20th, 2018

what do you think makes a story interesting? for I must do something wrong with my stories.

Report vildtiger · 251 views · Story: Living Darkness · #story writing fanfiction mlp

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vildtiger #2 · Dec 9th, 2018 · · ·

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I won't, but maybe people wouldn't bite your head off if you came with constructive criticism. I can't improve on what you have said as it honestly feels more like an attack on what I love doing

CosmosGalen #1 · Dec 7th, 2018 · · ·

Pushing on honesty here, your stories aren't well written and although you have some skill in drawing it's not so impressive.
That's only my opinion, don't bite my head off like everyone else usually does.

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