WOW!! first comment and still a great story

767276 I don't know how to respond to a comment like this, so let's just say...
GUSTA ME

767283 Glad you still like it, but let's make sure we keep the: First and: Second type of comment under a minimum, alrawr?

Dude.
Why?
Damn you I was on the verge of following this story.
SO FREAKING CLOSE TO IT.

The thing that killed me is that you killed her. Rarity. God damn you why?

Wow, Nice chapter dude, Found some mistakes:

I-I guess I have to tell you know >now

Also when characters are thinking put it like this 'Even if I can't see you anymore, I'm sure you're somehwere beautiful, Rarity. And please never forget that I love you...' This just makes it easier to figure out.

767349 I'm sorry that I ruined it for you, I really am. But don't worry too much though, Rarity will be part of this story later on. Ooh wait, spoiler alert... woops.

767391 Thank you, I'll get them out later

AND the best love story ever and the saddest ever to

767960 I'm not sure about that, but if people like it... yay~

Sigh...
Look, I am typing this with a VERY heavy heart.

I am going to follow this story, but do not take it as a sign that I like it.
I merely want to know the plot and ending to this, despite the fact you killed off my favorite character.

I have never done this before, but you did well with writing it, so you can have a track from me.
HOWEVER,
I still hate the story elements, despite the fact I'm following this, because I am tracking it with a saddened soul.

Go on.

768933 It saddens me to read your comment, but I fully understand it and I'm atleast glad you want to follow it, despite the fact that I killed of your favourite character.

To everyone who reads this comment, I'm glad for all the comments and favourites. I'll try to continue on the story as well as I can. Once again, if I offended anyone deeply by killing of Rarity, my deepest apologies. Thank you for reading this.

773075 To come. Rarity is still very important later on. In what shape or form, that's gonna stay as a secret for now.

I like this story, if the clop parts could get cut out, it would be GLORIOUS (for me)!

PS: I'm listening to my favourite Band while reading this story, and weirdly it fits a bit at the end :o

796735 Thank you, I'm glad you like it
And don't worry so much about the clopparts, the newer chapters will contain a lot less clop. And last but not least, nice music choice, gotta love Linkin Park

the nightmare part kind reminds me of dead space 2 when Nicole tries to kill you at the end

805784 Really? That's new But nice analogy none the less

Goddamnit it went hiatus

1168287 Don't worry, I'll update it as soon as possible (in other words, when I'm not being lazy )

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You know it funny. This is the only clopfic I read where Spike bangs a dragoness.

805784 I think that was the first one.....

2904414 well i don't remember the first game that much so you may be right

...um.....................yeah

Wow... this story. Wow.