• Member Since 9th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 31st, 2020

DoctorSerious


I'm very Serious, do I have anything else to say?

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You watch the sunset on the beach with Twilight, a good friend of yours. What will happen once you tell her that somtimes, you shouldn't think and let the beauty of it all just clear your mind?

A quick story I wrote. Don't expect best writing here.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Wow...dude this was Deep. The music went so well with this story (Few grammatical errors wrong word placement but meh) Good job :raritywink:

Words... can't express what I'm feeling right now. Like you said, logic can't describe emotions. This really hit home for me. The character is surprisingly a lot like myself, and, this just makes me feel... I don't know how this makes me feel. A lot of things I suppose. But thank you for this story. It was very well done, just a few errors, but nothing major. Excellent work.

849012>>849046 Both of you, thank you. :twilightsmile:

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