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Chelis


Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit

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6525370

Thanks <3

Excellent. Just what I needed today, a good clopfic. Well done, good sir :ajsmug:

We need more Sassy Saddles stories.

I liked this one, I really felt bad for the guy as I kept reading, good job on that part.

Would've been nice if it was longer though.

Somebody make a Sassy Saddles group so we can put this in it.

Alright fine

Expect it whenever

He he, all I have to say is her fiance is a lucky guy.

[...] pussy already drenched in our justice.

So good you'll fill her pussy with justice!

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Do they not realize how cirlecjerky that sounds?
>Horse News
Oh.

Hot, and with an interesting mix of emotions, but Sassy's motivation seemed weird and shallow. She says she's never done it with anyone but her fiance, but there she is, acting like a super-slut, sending nude selfies to a stranger she just barely met, and then fucking him without hardly getting to know him at all, going right in and starting a blowjob without hardly a word said between them first.

I mean, with how quickly and matter-of-factly they got down to it, I expected him to pay her afterwards.

6549530

Shallow girls are hot though, just switch the 'h' around with a 'w' and you get swallow

6549723
If there had been some little one-liner about how sexy she thought he was, I could buy the shallow girl thing, but there's not even that.

There's no reasoning given at all for why she so suddenly wants to have sex with a stranger.

6549888
I'm probably going to regret this later but:

>analyzing a clopfic

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6550273
Ha! Fair enough.
And right after I've been so over-analyzed in How to Take Care of Your Mare, no less.

6550385

Id say take a seat, pop open a brewsky, and say "i just wrote that steaming pile of saucey, damn im good."

She got down on her knees, staring at my crotch in anticipation.
"I never done this with anyone other than my fiancee,"

Fuuuuuuck... that so turned me on. *gulps a full glass of water*
:twilightoops:

"How do you want it?" I asked.
"Ravage me like a wild beast," she said with excitement in her eyes.

*downs another glass of water*

"Fuck me, daddy! Cum in me, daddy!" She moaned as she used her legs to wrap around my back.

*glug* *glug *glug*

I decided to let go and cum, thinking she would give me a chance to pull out. Instead, she held me closer and brought me into a deep kiss. I felt my seed shoot out of my urethra and into a pussy already drenched in our justice.

JUSTICE!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

6529857 Lol!!!

6550813

Thats right! justice for all the literal fuckers!

6550831 goddamn good damn work. Adding this to the favorites :ajsmug:

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Oh, it's steaming, alright.

Maybe things will calm down now that it's out of the box though...

(By the way, is there a source for that cover image, perhaps?)

Comment posted by Chelis deleted Dec 1st, 2015
Comment posted by dirty little secret deleted Dec 1st, 2015

Okay. I read this title, and I must wonder: How would anyone make a main character likeable based on that premise? He's automatically a piece of shit.

Surrounding the hotel was one of the worse neighborhoods of Canterlot. While the rich, the royals, and the famous used all of the city as their expensive amusement park, the small slums tucked away were home to those running the show, the maids, the servers, the maintenance workers, and the general riff-raff.

Yeh but that's in the past, right now Equestria now has a free class system thanks to bunch of Reforms left by the Modecans

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