The UNSC Timelane is a frigate that has been sent on a mission to find out what this new planet right next to Covenant territory has and if it can be used. But what they don't expect is Equestria begging for help needing their help, Demon Skull squad is on the case.
This is a Halo/MLP crossover, I do not own ether Halo nor mlp, Demon Skulls are my own squad, sorry if they are someone else's. Anyway hope you enjoy the story and have a great day/night.
Never played halo but this is a great story.
What does UNSC stand for?
6828278 Oh right, unsc stands for the United Nations Space Command, given during halo 2, maybe one, not sure. Anyway there you go.
well, if any of you want another chapter, it has been delayed, I wrote about half the chapter, though thanks to my oh so crappy internet.
It was deleted, so please hold on, it won't take to long to rewrite.
Hoo boy, this could use a once-over, maybe even a twice-over, with an editor and a fine-tooth comb. 'S a good story, but dayum, some of the things that need to be edited....
Ok its at 15 now do it lol
6881277 Ya, I need to find an editor, still looking, sorry about the mistakes.
6881884 I like your attitude fine sir. Just let me write it first
Sequel needed!
Terrible grammar and Terrible Plot.
6828278 United Nations space command
Good story, but needs major rewriting, also needs to be longer and more fleshed out. Also needs a sequel.
7711861 After I finish a story I'm trying to finish, I'll probably rewrite this with an editor, and a sequel is after those two priorities.
This story could be much better first you rushed into it to quickly you don't really understand what's going on and the cause words how they have the *s in the middle is annoying. Over all yo the story is decent that I will continue reading it.
7731425 Thanks, I'm gonna be rewriting this story very soon and I appriciate all the help I can get, and the only reason I used the *, is because I didn't want to show cus words. And I'll work on slowing the pace, this was a very old story of mine.