A rewrite of the original, original here.
[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/285266/halo-unsc-frigate-timelane ] BTW, the original is very poorly wrote, and you don't need to read it if you haven't.
Gore tag is for fight scenes, and sex tag is for implication of the deed.
The UNSC Timelane is a frigate that has been sent on a mission to find out what this new planet right next to Covenant territory has and if it can be used. But what they don't expect is Equestria begging for help needing their help, Demon Skull squad is on the case.
This is a Halo/MLP crossover, I do not own ether Halo nor mlp, Demon Skulls are my own squad, sorry if they are someone else's. Anyway hope you enjoy the story and have a great day/night.
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I apologize for saying this: but I think you may have wasted your own time re-writing something that most people are probably going to pass on. To me, the Halo franchise should've stopped after Reach since it was the start of the franchise's decline. 343i has already put the final nail in the coffin already; and I definitely do not plan on getting HW2
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I appreciate your effort though.
7934435 I did some cleaning up, there's still stuff to work on, but inform me if this is better then it was.
7935250 Ya, I don't like halo games after 4, and yes, many people won't give a damn about this story, but I still promised it, and I delivered. It was more of an upholding of the promise of a rewrite or a sequel, and when this is done, there will be a sequel, if enough people like it, if they don't, I'll just end it at this story.
7936469 Alright then. That's fair enough. I'll just wish you good luck
7936650 Thanks.
Man, my opinion, the history is good but a bit rushed, i liked It but i don't think It needs a sequel Just the last chapter
7988925 Thanks for the advice, and I really don't wanna write a sequel, and if you read the first story, it was a lot faster with little to no detail, it was early. But I will be writing the epilogue.
7991484 i just like an good history and yours was one off the many i've been reading and criticism helps
7992692 It does, and I appriciate that, i have open comments, say what you want, plus I wrote this story while also doing 4 college classes, and a few high school classes, so not much room to work and always tired. I just like people reading stuff I make, I never take these things personally.
7994876 my good sir you have my congratulations on keeping the history up and doing 4 classes, and good luck with your classes
7995518 Thank you, it's tough, but I'm getting it done.
Rifles, not riffles.
8141061 Thanks, just didn't see that.
"Drink until Macy blackouts."
*blacksout
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Thanks man, did not know that, never drank.
Well the hunter is now a pile of worm corpses.
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Well lunar you’re wrong because halo infanint by 343 is the best by 343.But I see your point.
I got a hangover yesterday
Ooooooooh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.
Ooooof poor Covies.
Really you misspelled up.
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Thanks for finding that, and it has been edited, glad to see people reading to this day.
Sequel?
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I was working on one, but the story truly sucked, just god awful. So I scrapped it, I may work on it later, but want to wait until Halo Infinite to follow the story correctly, and writing a FoE story is kinda taking my time. So one day, right now, I wouldn't hold my breathe.