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// A rewrite that's better in many ways 
// Story: Halo U.N.S.C Frigate Timelane 
// by Element Reading 
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Hey there everyone, this is a new rewrite, now you all might be wondering what's different, and is it worth reading? The answer is yes, these are just a couple ways this story's worth reading. It has longer chapters, goes at a slower pace, but not too slow, it has some differences that are interesting, and the writing isn't nearly as cringey as this story is, I've gotten a lot better. And the biggest reason why you should read the story is a twist ending that should satisfy you all, and it'll open a doorway to a sequel if it get's enough love. So what are you waiting for? Go read it.

Link to story (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/356925/unsc-frigate-timelane-rewrite)