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Azrael the alicorn


Great fan of mlp, and follower of Princess Luna

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A mysterious, powerful and terrifying relic that has reemerged from ancient times...

An alicorn who has a dark secret...

An evil being who has returned from the grave...

The Mane 6 have faced several threats, coming out from every one victorious. But this time they shall face a power that goes beyond harmony and disharmony, or good and evil. It is a power that every living being must face: Death.

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 131 )

is that of please of Death from darksiders 2?

Yup. Darksiders is one of my most beloved video games series ever, so I've decided to pay a little homage to it.

5961773 this will get my fave simply becuse of darksiders.

5961837 apsolutely. I have bested 2 on diferent times and is working on the first.

Only one thing wrong. Adressing them as the 'mane 6' when they are The Bearers Of Harmony'

You have certainly grabbed my attention! Though, please, don't forget to add the closing quotation mark at the end of a dialogue. It's kind of sliglty annoying me...
I look forward to seeing how this story plays out!

A good start, I look forward to where this leads too.

By the way, you're on the popular stories list. Good for you :)

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All my fault, sorry. I'll get Azrael to fix it.

We're only human, and even with Google translate, translating is no easy task. I might have missed a couple here and there.

Really glad you enjoyed it though.

Well. Rainbow certainly is fearless, if she doesn't give more than half of a damn about Death himself.

5963636 She won't be fearless for long. Or at least, she gonna be less arrogant.

Badass alicorn OC... Check
Death controlling villan who was-suppoused-to-be-dead-but-isn't... Check
Obvious PrincessxOC shipping... Check
Dangerous artifact hunting... Check

Please add to this story shit-ton of action
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So... when will Death come into the story?

5970403 You shall be patient, my friend. Death will come, but not so soon. When Death will appaer is gonna be appaer like a boss :rainbowdetermined2:

5977143 You got me interested, your writing has also improved quite a bit.

5972178 And im sure you're gonna like who's gonna voice him :pinkiegasp:

5978112 If you like Darksiders series you're gonna love the voice wich Death has. Guess who :ajsmug:..

5978214 I wanted to be a surprise but okay: Micheal Wincott.

5978244 that is not same voice cast for Death from Darksiders 2!?

Chapter 4 is done but it just need some adjustment

5981860 You will not have to wait too much for the next chapters. The story is completed and it has just to be translated from my language (Italian) to English thanks to Arctofire and JJ.

5981884 i realy want to learn italian. Google translate is not very helpful. :rainbowlaugh:
I look forward to seeing what will happen next. :pinkiehappy:

5981884 And it's been a pleasure working and reading you story! :yay:

Now let's see how long it takes for them to realise that the way to beat him is to steal the glyph from him.

5982379 The solution is not gonna be so easy.

Una

Sorry my friend but story is far to rushed, the hero also seems rather less then...his title applies.

I don't think I could translate, but I intend to remain as your proofreader, Azrael. You can count on that.

6026381 It's gonna look better from now on. But I don't want to make of him a Gary Stu like of character.

I would still be happy to proofread along with JJ. I'm still happy to help you with a few hiccups and polish things up.

I feel so guilty now... :( But I'm going to try and find someone who will carry on for the time being. If need be, I could maybe resume for a little bit until you find someone and you want a new chapter out. I can do that much.

6028284 Don't feel bad, Arcto, you and don't worry because I have decided to write the story on my own. But if you want to help me by Proofreading with JJ your welcome.

Hmm, it doesn't look like received this chapter for proofreading.

6032894 I wanted to give both you and Arctofire the chapter before but my mouse is a pain to work with. I will try to sent you Chapter 6 next week.

Next chapter is gonna be posted this week, if everything goes according to the plan.

Oh no...the formatting got messed up! I'm sorry...I thought google docs would have been able to fix that...

And then Death throws sombra inte the shoul eaters mauth shuting the both up and killing sombra all in 5 seconds flat. The end.

I'm gonna go ahead and call that Death will be freed and pissed for some reason about the deaths of everypony and bring them all back

Formatting is a bit off...you ought to try and fix that

6122493 and letting War rip the siul eaters fucking head of.

6125214 This story is not exactly a crossover between Darksiders and MLP but more a tribute to the videogame series. Death of SOD will look like the one from DS but that's the only difference. Sure if you like War too I can find a way to make him appaer in the future installment of this series.

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