Im the Lord of ... CATS! Bow to me like the humons and ponies you are. Then bring me catnip and pet me while I purr. (On hiatus.)
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Noice job man
6322291 Yay! My first review and its good!
Love it, hate u, want your story. ( gets a shotgun and uses pinkie pies powers to get inside your home ) come out where ever you are
6322593 ok the one down and I may or may not hate u
6323040 Im glad you dont hate me BUT I do keep bow in my room JUST for things like this.
Sorry, you're on the wait list. At least this looks kinda interesting...
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( Finds u on a lap top with a bow and arrow next to u ) let's see bow vs the M90 OP shotgun, I say that I win. ( takes ame put then an arrow go's by, look to my right and see 27 elves all with bows and arrows and laegos in the front with a halo S.A.W. ) Oh FUCK ( starts running like a little birch with arrows and buttles going in my duration )
6323121 Its fine honestly.
6323132 Good girl!
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It won't be for long! I swear!
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I'm a boy
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And I just called in ODST to take down the elves, now I'm just waiting for one of the two to win. If the ODST win, I get the story. If u win u get a story idea I've been thinking of doing for a long time.
6323740 *Sobs*
6323740 The elfs send the ODST to a dark realm called Hell
I'm liking the story so far. I have a feeling that this story is hyped by Halo 5, no?
6324181 Not really but I am sooooo waiting for it
To bad were use to it
Another good Halo Displaced story
Yay
Whoa. That's new.
Yeya!
Okay then....
6332346 I agree
6337636 Did you just add comments as you read? XD Im doing that form now on.
6338813 Pretty much
6338835 Yaaaayyyyy.
At first glance, this doesn't look all that promising, and it hasn't piqued my interest, but I'll read it anyway.
6342328 Awww.
Nice story so far. Just a heads up, almosy every instance of from in this is misspelled as form.
Moar Noow!!
6361484 Shhh Writer quirk.
6361791 Immm tryyinnnng One Piece is addictive.
Well it was fun though. XD
Previous chapter was good, this was too focused on another person from a fic I don't read, 2/10
Huh. So, as soon as the Zaku showed up everything goes center aligned. Who hit it and forgot? I ask because it bugs me on the level that the story isn't a bunch of titles, so it needs to be left aligned, maybe tabbed over. Also, I kept having to stop and reread Spartan as the spartan during the fight.
this... it's beautiful
Next chapter WILL have Forerunner/Precursor bullshit, making sure its factual so itll take abit
Just got done reading everything you wrote so far and I got to say very entertaining So far so you got my Fav and a up vote
6425306 Yayyy, it hard writing so many AI's as there quirky nature soon take all the love.
He seems a little light on damage options there, just one type of ranged explosive, one type of high fire rate, and a single shotgun. He needs a flame thrower, a couple plasma options, a needler and pounds of crystals for it, a fuel rod cannon, the forerunner rocket launcher and shotgun, then he is packing enough fire power for a grave mind fight. No, I am not kidding, he is about a ton under weight for this fight. Hell, that's not even including all the ammo for all of them.
Boom headshot ... Lol'd my ass off
6482247 YOU FINALLY HAVE NOT GUESS MY PLANS!!! *laughs degrangdly*
6482247 But in all seriousness the reason he took NO plasma weapons are that Flood are partly immune to heat based weapon while projectlie ones easily rip the body to sherds.
6482578 Thank you!
6483054 Still going in light.
6483819 I chose them for a reason!~
Hmmm... So he is turning a town into a centralized defensive point. Good idea except for one thing. The door opens and is made of wood. The flood have no qualms about burying it until the door breaks and their dead fill the room. The scorpions, warthogs, turrets, and sentries are good ideas though. Still think he needs a flame thrower for lighting them on fire so they can cause others to burn, and repeat.
6517954 The door is gone, and its showed that the Flood will, if they get the chance to funnel into a bilding to try to infect but it give Spartan the chance to use the most effecitve weapon he has, shotty. Also are you just always up?
Convenient? I think you mean Covenant.
My god! The whole scene with Spartan threatening to shoot his balls off. Fucking hilarious!