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Lon35hadow


A gamer for as long as I can remember, and always willing to help my friends; gamer or non gamer; Xbox, Playstation, or PC: if I can help, I will.

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Here come the downvotes.

But at the very least, you chose one of the tougher non-DLC Destiny Strike Bosses to choose.

And that's just one of the reasons why Valus Ta'aurc will remain my favourite Cabal...

6541276 Mau'ual is from Taken King

6541282 Oh wait, you chose that one?

But also, it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity.

I mean, don't get me wrong, it's interesting to see your ideas, but I think that a good idea for a crossover would be if someone gets taken to Equestria as Oryx himself. And even then, it would take some good writing skills to make it a good crossover.

What I'm saying is: Don't stop trying until you find something that works...

6541290 Oh god someone needs to write that, have him with taken armies and everything XD

I've never played destiny before but I'll give this story a chance beside I like cabirou getting their ass kicked XD

good enuf to read for me...

6541276

Valus is a rank of cabal.

6541648 Why the Caribou? I see no reason why-

Caribou, a patriarchal society, have taken over Equestria, essentially turning all but well hidden mares into sex slaves, and most, if not all, stallions have been brainwashed into accepting the Caribou's view

CHANGED MY MIND KILL THEM ALL MAU'UAL!!! KILL EVERY SINGLE LAST ONE OF THE CARIBOU IN ALL MULTIVERSES!!! AND GARY STUS IF YOU CAN!

In the meantime while you're killing them I'm going to make the one-man army guardian. His super? Equal to this because of his gear. ITEM

lets hope it doesnt dies like the others of his kind

6544875 LOL you do that while I take photos of your awesomeness. XD

Huh. You know, only one other Displaced wound up as a villian from Destiny, and he is the Kell of Wolves. That should be a fun meetup, what with him taking the Crystal Empire from right under Sombra, and making it a successful nation. He would probably help out within about five minutes of being there. I mean, he is almost bored of dealing with a Celestia stabbing him in the back, or trying to at least, so going on a blood greased murder frenzy against the caribou would probably be fun for an hour.

6552282 I know that story. Good read.

6552372 Indeed it is. Fun to see how it's changed since the beginning.

finally a story where someone fights the Caribou so fat this is the only one i found if there any others i couldn't find them can anyone e-mail me there titles if know any other stories like this?

6562433 There was a chapter that involved fighting the caribou in the Alucard Displaced story, can't recall the title off the top of my head currently. Though, fair warning, lot of consensual sex and one chapter of rape. Besides the caribou one. Oh, and gore. If that wasn't obvious, gallons of the stuff.

more please!

treat others as you wish to be treated is a good moral to apply to that situation.

Time to demonstrate why the Cabal are respected as enemies. After all, he hasn't fired once yet.

then, for no apparent reason.... a cabal fleet arrives.
more please!

6562433 i know of one were it's lord Tirek as the leader of the rebellion Fall of Equestria: Equestria Stands

Meh. Needs some work.

Every rebellion need a symbol a rallying call what will be yours?

6588329 Not going to give it away.

I reached my right hand down into it, getting the blood on my glove. I exhaled, thinking, Requiescat in pace, Italian for "Rest in peace", and planted my palm on my chest, leaving a bloody hand print on my chest

Requiescat in pace is Latin, not Italian.

6589026 I got is from AC2, so sorry.

6589380 Oh, I see. Don't worry, considering the period when the game is set, it wouldn't surprise me if the characters quoted phrases in Latin. The Italian version for Rest in peace is Riposa in pace.
So far the story seems nice (I'm just a bit sorry for Spike).

6589533 Thanks, and like I said in the notes, I didn't want to.

6589568 I have no real issues with it, it is your story after all, you have all the rights to decide what to write in order to make it go on, even if it means make decisions that people may not approve. If it mean the death of a character, well, so it be.

... He went far to kindly I think. He is still in one piece. His chest just caved in. Value needs a nice big claymore. Or perhaps, more appropriate, the ancient Japanese anti Calvary "sword". Best example of that would be Sanosuke Sagahara's sword from Ruruoni Kenshin. It's low tech, but hey, it works for a reason, and considering the most advanced physical type ranged weapon is a cannon... Yeah, he can only shoot so many times any ways.

Not a fan of the new Alicorn, Cadence and Twilight had to save a town before they got theirs, and don't put to much into music.

Hey it's your story. Do what you want. Yet, I am sad that you had to kill off Spike. :c

is the main character a human now or is he the same species as he entered the world.

6591828 The same species, the Tree simply modified his appearance so that ponies would be able to see him as something familiar instead of a potential alien conqueror.

Countryisms are hard to write, so don't feel too bad about hating writing AJ. Plus, a Deep South accent like you have managed to write successfully is just another layer of difficult with her. Any way, Alicorn Fluer gets my approval. Unlike Alicorn Twilight. You also used my headcanon about how alicorns are supposed to be chosen by sheer coincidence.

Dude just get a girl born and raised down south as your editor for AJ.:ajbemused:

"But that isn't the worst part?"
"What is, then?"
"Dainn is with them."

Personally I would break out Laughing, Laughing at a 'Leaders' idiocy and arrogance to charge at an Unknown enemy because they think that they can Win.

"War is won in steps not One Step."

Then again you can play to their Greed and see who bites, Make a sign that reads "Free Mares at Town Hall, One at a time No Pushing".

dain is going to get his ass handed to him on a silver platter.:pinkiehappy:

... Honestly, I don't mind that Silver is a doe. She wants her race to be better than rapists even if she has to go against them to get them to do so. Besides, so far she has been decent about everything.

6657331 You forget that Dainn defeated Celestia by himself, and though Mau'ual can defeat his enforcers, he is unproven again himself.

6658190 Celestia is not a Warrior and she never could be, Luna did have some Warrior in her but not much. To Defeat Celestia is easy in all Fields except magic but taking a few hostages and feeding on her base weakness and she wont use it.

What it comes down to is Not what you could do but what you Would do and Valus can do anything because he has no real weakness to tie him down (only that he is one man), but Dainn has been falling slowly into the peaceful mindset close to Luna's and will make rash actions that are more Emotional than Tactical.

6659322 You forget that he has led his forces, maybe not directly, but still, against the Resistance for three years. And right now, he has an army behind him, and mares to use as shields.

Is the name of this chapter a reference to the skillet song.

*looks at chapter name* 0.0 *looks at youtube tab*

Dude... you are scaring me now...

There are two ways to fix Dainn. One is normally done by a veterinarian, the other is bullet to the brain. Or, considering MLP, orbital friendship cannon to the face.

(Finishes reading chapter) wait, after the fight, where are lula and tia?

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