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5thWriter
I'm a 28 year old Texas brony, who enjoys meeting new people here on Fimfiction.
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What he said. You had captured my attention and hopes that there will be some breastplay in the next chapter.
Btw, which one is the H cup? I wanna say either Gilda or Zecora.
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Are you really interested or interested in it like a cat with a cardboard box? We all know the cat isn't really interested in the box, but he doesn't want any one else to have it or mess with him.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Trust me, there will be plenty of breast play in the next chapter. The H-cup belongs to Zecora.
You had me at huge breasts.
Is the next chapter going to have sex, or will it just be foreplay?
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It'll have getting to know each other, foreplay, clop, clop, clop, and epilogue.
Well, that was probably the least impressive way they could have possibly dispatched a pair of thugs.
More to the point, if there was a pair of police officers within immediate shouting distance and they witnessed the guys assaulting and robbing Mac, why did they need to falsely accuse them of rape? They'd already committed an actual crime. Bizarre.
That seems like an unnecessary harsh way to deal with bullies. Also why doesn't Zecora rhyme?
Look at the tags on the story, good author, and then read that sentence again. You might find something to be out of place.
6195854 Because it drew the police's attention much quicker.
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I think the difference between three girls screaming "HELP, POLICE!" and screaming "HELP, POLICE, WE'RE BEING RAPED!" is negligible when the police are apparently just around the corner.
They could have even admitted to the police that they had just said that to get them there quicker, and then fingered the guys as a pair of muggers. But nope, they get accused of a much more serious crime that they hadn't even been contemplating. Not cool, ladies.
6195094 I'm actually interested, I'll be watching this one. Oh, and you!
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Zecora isn't rhyming because I can't rhyme for shit.
I can see the false rape accusation doubling as an excuse to have the three expose their breasts, but there are probably at least two other simple ways to get them to reveal some flesh...
er, fur... and chest tuft. Like another person pointed out: if the officers were right around the corner, that's three witnesses all saying that these two dorks were mugging poor Mac.Edit: They're humanized. I forgot.
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Yes, it is flesh. they're human in this story.
Also, to point out to everyone, this is a work of fiction so it doesn't have to make logical sense.
6198560 ah, right. Forgot... and I'm blind apparently since I didn't see the tag :T
Well, here's to hoping there's a recurring theme of peculiar ways to solving problems :P
6198560 Well, yes, you can just write nonsensical dreck, if you so choose. But if you're trying to write good fiction it's important to try to write your story in a way that is believable despite being fictional. But I won't fault you if that's not what you're attempting. I will point out that others you might want to read your fiction will.
Interesting start, but I do have a question. Why are they being called mares if they're human? If it were anthro, I'd get it. Just wondering. I'll still be watching this. I make a ton of stupid mistakes in my stories and people still read them. Maybe.
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Where's the next chapter?