• Member Since 10th Jun, 2013
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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

Comments ( 10 )

Orgasmic reading?

Yeah. I am fine with it. But it's to late for today. So it goes on my read-later-shelf.

lol, Loved it. Wish it were longer though.

That was interesting. I liked it lol

*Turns on Judas Priest* Ok, here we go.

Short and sweet. :twilightsmile:

Honestly, though, would there be any better way to read? :rainbowwild:

That was sexy, cute and adorable.:twilightsmile:

Fun little story, worth the read. Alway love seeing the little games lovers get up to keep their sex life from getting dull.

Minor spelling mistake, look for "bpeering" and remove that "b".

While I liked the idea behind this, the story was lacking a lot of necessary details and finished much too soon. Furthermore, I think you padded the story with too much from the book they were reading. This is a clopfic, not a story about them reading the book for the audience. I found myself skipping over the book parts just to get to the sex.

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