• Member Since 13th Oct, 2013
  • offline last seen June 16th

Rain Light


There, past the last star, lies a secret.

T

[TwiDash]
Sometimes, accidents happen. Sometimes, those accidents reveal something wonderful about us. And sometimes, they bring ponies closer together.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 17 )

Nicely written, We approve

This was adorable.

Twilight & Rainbow approve! :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

Great job for your first!

Hgghghsnnnnng

Cute as heck.

Awesome and cute. :heart::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::heart:

Well written, fluffy, cute...what a good way to end a day.

Very nice story! I liked it! :twilightsmile:

6452574 Dat gif though.

Nicely done, keep up a good work:rainbowkiss:
Best of luck with further writtings:twilightsmile:

Short, cute and sweet. :)

Thank you so much for the support, guys! I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and a bit astonished that I got a hundred likes in such a short time, and am continuing to get more. I couldn't ask for anything better, you guys are awesome! :pinkiehappy:

To be honest, I'm not quite sure what I think of this one.

So I guess you would say they've come out of the closet now?

Alternate ending: the closet turns out to be the portal to Narnia.

This is the second time I've read this (first time, I think, before I had an account) and it's it still super adorable! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

Very well done mate, especially for you first try, I like the ending as well, I can write stories, but never seem to be able to come up with an ending that I'm happy with. Once again though, absolutely brilliant job.

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