• Published 9th Dec 2015
  • 6,084 Views, 18 Comments

Hooficured - Art Inspired



Mainly thanks to constantly sore hooves, rather than going to the spa like she should, Rainbow's been visiting Rarity for help instead. After Rarity refuses this time around, however, it being pointless, she talks Rainbow into visiting the spa.

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Aprion #1 · Dec 9th, 2015 · · 1 ·

There was nothing but blue dust launched in all of the file's tiny crevices

I think you mean latched, not launched :pinkiesmile: really liked this little story :twilightsmile:

6716198 >Launch
I've been playing too much Fallout 4. Latched works better anyways. Thanks!

Comment posted by Jondor deleted Dec 10th, 2015

This was fairly cute and adorable. Even the sex scene was more cute then erotic, with the way Dash was acting. I do wonder if they lied to Dash to make her calmer though. About them doing this type of stuff with Rarity, I mean. They seemed quite adamant about Rarity not finding out. It could have had to do with retaining costumer secrecy. Or, they could have lied to Dash, and do this with many others, but I would like to think they didn't. Still, Fluttershy has got to be a tempting target, and she goes there often with Rarity...

Cute and adorable. Seeing Rainbow Dash get all worked up about ponies touching her hooves and the end result was a cute sex scene, made this story all worth while! Great job.

6716208 Pretty sure it's "lodged", actually.

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True, but it's just a bit jarring to read. It would be as if someone wrote that a character grabbed something with their hand.

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Well that was... interesting...
Cute ending, though.

isnt there a clop comic about this?

7271436 If there is, I've never read it...

7272544 I'm pretty sure you were thinking of a comic known as The Usual, correct?

So did they lie when they implied Rarity liked to watch?

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