I'm actually a slab of beef jerky with a top hat and a cool microphone.
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A lovely story. Leaves me wanting more. MOAR!
yay calcs alive. stupid work. ill have to read this later, man i love wingplay.
3360020 Thank you
3360598 Yes, I am alive, luckily
I loves me some good wingplay. Excellent work Calc. Perhaps we'll get to see how Rainbow repays Rarity's generosity some time? ;)
3362235 HEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH We'll see
another win calc,and damn fine wingplay i am rather hoping along with several others that we get to read the reciprocation
It was alright. Short. I just called something 27,000 words short, and this is tiny by comparison. Would've liked to see at least another chapter.
No major bad things noticed.
Final score: 3/5, the perfect middle.
3368026 Oh, yeah, I know it's short. I mere 2k words is like a baby fic. At any rate, thank you for reading! My others are slightly longer, so they have more time to get things in there.
Anyway, thanks for reading
“write” is right right here, not “right”. :-p
Otherwise, great story!
3525277 GOODNESS GRACIOUS!
Well...
That's embarrassing.
Ladies and gentlecolts, it has been proven that I am officially a dumbass!
Thanks for pointing that out, hehe.
Awesome little story, with just enough of a hint that Rarity's got more experience with wings than she lets on. Very clever.
Really good, but I am curious about what Twilight and Pinkie were doing.
D'awwww that was adorable. I'm... not sure it counts as cloppy, since it was very tame and non-descriptive, but that's s how I like it <3 Nice work
Fun story to read and I found interest in it.
Although a little disappointed there's no chapter two for rainbowdash paying back rarity.
Other wise a great FIM FIC.
3990117 *cough* *points at other story, titled Diamonds are a Mare's Best Friend*
5752123 Heeey, You're Alive... Congratulations!
That was cute.
I'm glad this didn't end up as a RariDash shipping story.
It's more adorable.
This was a trip. The intimacy of the preening was well written, and I loved the reactions each girl had.