Plunder

No I Will Not

No I Will Not #1 · Oct 20th, 2015 · 3 · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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Hot damn

Al mai yus!
>fapping intensifies

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #2 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · 1 · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6549508
I hope you like it. To me, it's a dud of a fic.

No I Will Not

No I Will Not #3 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6549590
I love it

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #4 · Oct 21st, 2015 · 2 · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6549632
Wow, three folks downvoted you for only saying the truth. Shame on them. Everyone has bad eggs, once in a while.

6549696

I don't wanna say this is a dud as much as a blue print for something better. It sounded like a story that was like, "Boom, horny," without much lead in.

This story depresses me. It's not the actual tenta-action that gets me. It's everything before. The Twilight and Spike interaction. The sense of normality kept up until she found the pot. I put down the narrative notes for a bigger story and choked it to death with porn. I wanted to get to the point as fast as possible. I wanted to write sex and hit the fetishes on my outline.

This fic could have been something. It could have been something real like All Colors of A Camera. And I hollowed it out to suit my purposes.

After writing this in August, this was the one story that had me stuck in a rut. Maybe, it still does.

Also, this had the possibility for vore, if we're throwing out fetishes.

Haven't you read a Bimbofication fic before? There's only one substance that can satisfy her...

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #5 · Oct 21st, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6549907
Thanks for reading.

Angelgrace

Angelgrace #6 · Oct 21st, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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That's weird.

This is actually one of the better clopfics I've read. The pacing is good, Twilight's reactions are believable FUCKING MAGICAL TATTOOS ARE MY FETISH and it comes out rather well. The final parts were a bit lackluster, but only such that we don't know how much of Twilight is left.

6553662

Bimbo is a popular fetish. Not my cup of tea, but people like it.

iamli3

iamli3 #7 · Oct 22nd, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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>sex pollen
well...that's a new one....

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #8 · Oct 22nd, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6553662
It was the clopfic trend back in August. Technically, this is my second bimbofication fic and the only one done on someone who was unwilling. In contrast to Plunder, Sensitive Much is more light-hearted and I guess, silly. If you didn't like this fic, you might like the other one.

6553978
Thanks for reading and I agree with everything you mentioned, writing-wise.

Bimbo is a popular fetish. Not my cup of tea, but people like it.

*nods sagely* Like you said.

6554670
If there are tentacles, there will usually be sex pollen. The two go together like peanut butter and chocolate.

iamli3

iamli3 #9 · Oct 23rd, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6555757 i haven't had peatnut butter and chocolate nor have i read a fix that had sex pollen i don't think , except maybe ofr the fic where a flower sexed fluttershy and turned her into a flower as well to kept on sexing her :l .....

Mx Story Anomalax

Mx Story Anomalax #10 · Nov 8th, 2015 · 8 · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6554670 Flora kink has a whole niche in and of itself. I could mention a lot of different possibilities here. Pollen is inherently floating sperm.

71M073J

71M073J #11 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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I like very much. Too bad there's no more:)

Troublesome Beast

Troublesome Beast #12 · Apr 6th, 2016 · · · And First, Her Ring of Thorns ·

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6555757 In reference to the bimbo thing, I have a guilty pleasure there; I like strong, tough, smart female leads... with immense tits and asses and occasionally stomachs if I'm not having them go the washboard amazon route. The best combination of the two I've found was Spike's Bimbo-Filled Life, where it was clear that while their attention spans for non-sexual things were being rapidly cut or made easy to distract from, their basic intellect and passions were still there and operating around it all.

Of course, the sabotaging birth control aspect, which is a major part of some really, really ugly abuse RL just put me back into "But... fetish... if... augh!" Of course, in the context of the story it's made clear that the Elements are going to keep pushing until pregnancy happens, so I appreciate that, but. I digress. Added to my legions of doom, and by legions of doom, I mean my read later list.

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