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Magnificent Bastard

Magnificent Bastard #1 · Nov 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Wow, this was pretty good. you definitely earned that like.

she oughta no better about messing with a stallion.

I think you oughta fix that.

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #2 · Nov 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks for reading. And I've fixed that mistake.

The Diplomat

The Diplomat #3 · Nov 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah, this is pretty interesting. Intent on making more like this? This Joshua character seems pretty at ease with his encounters with her and Dash, but not in an annoying way.

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #4 · Nov 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Thanks for reading. I'm actually thinking about writing a bigger story like a romance with the same themes and fetishes but I'm still in the mood for one-shots. I might write a Fluttershy one-shot to finish this series of sorts but don't quote me on this.

This Joshua character seems pretty at ease with his encounters with her and Dash, but not in an annoying way.

Joshua? There's a still a mention of Joshua in this fic? Time to edit.

Lighting Ace

Lighting Ace #5 · Nov 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Je so it was all a dream, interesting. Also good thing you are considering making this into a normal story

UraniumKnight

UraniumKnight #6 · Nov 5th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah, it's "Josuha's hips started to jerk..."

Kinda threw me when I read it. Find and replace fail you this go 'round?

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #7 · Nov 5th, 2015 · · ·

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I got it. Thanks for reading and pointing it out.

I don't know why find and replace didn't work that time but forget all about Josuha. *throws smoke bomb*.

Misty Dolphin

Misty Dolphin #8 · Nov 5th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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well that was fun, kudos.

Cosmic Flare

Cosmic Flare #9 · Nov 18th, 2015 · · ·

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This was a good hot story. I like it.

Derpys Muffin Dealer

Derpys Muffin Dealer #10 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · · ·

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That was a dirty, dirty trick .... Guess Princess Luna can be a troll too...

Narlepoax III

Narlepoax III #11 · Dec 23rd, 2015 · · ·

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This one's got a lot more errors in it than the last one did.

Did you lose your editor?

Glitter Grenade

Glitter Grenade #12 · Dec 24th, 2015 · · ·

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If you want to know something funny, I actually worked on this one first before I did Release. It should be objectively better than Release because I sat on it for a couple of weeks and forced myself to finish it.

This is the one the editor looked at before I changed my mind on publishing a Applejack version. To be honest, my writing is cleaner when I'm free-balling using the three rough draft method than when I'm relying on a pre-reader to catch the mistakes I miss.

Narlepoax III