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Glitter Grenade


Writing GLORIOUS trash. Nothing more or less.

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Shocks #1 · May 19th, 2016 · · 1 ·

Just like real dogs, Mistress Bitch's room was covered in her pussy musk and urine.

lol wat.

I wonder what I'm getting myself into. Hope at least Luna treats the human nicely.

Glad to see you post a new story regardless.

Good job keep up the good work

Seems interesting for a read. I almost thought this was a one-shot.

Is Luna humanized, anthro, was is she?

when is the next chapter, please be soon:fluttercry:.

7229850 I feel like I don't even need to read the story, the best line was right here. :rainbowlaugh:

Congratulations with a first featured story!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Also, how long it story will be?

7230167 it sounds like she is based on the wording.

Hmm... this looks like it'll be interesting. Wonder how the human will react to Luna... or act around her.

Aside from time constraints, why didn't Asher strangle those dirty snitches?

He certainly seemed to have enough resentment to desire it, but I guess this story isn't tagged dark for a reason.

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Well there's no anthro tag so there is hope for this story yet.

7231180 There comes a time when your pity for a being that's nothing more than an empty husk overcomes your anger at them. I think he understands that they don't have any idea what's going on around them anymore, living only to serve their mistress. He's angry at their actions, but not at them.

You don't get angry at the broken.

So who reckons that Luna just picked up that poor fellas remote control? He does still have his collar on, yes?

You might want to put something in the description about OOC-ness from Luna, as well as slavery, if this happens to go where I think it is going. :pinkiesick:

Interesting read but for the love of Christ "pussy musk" never use that description again.

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The story mentioned her having hands and hooves, yet not fur. That is why I am confused.

wlam #18 · May 20th, 2016 · · 19 ·

I am continually amazed by the sheer volume of horrible crap that makes the feature list here. It really puts that endless brony whining of "we are really not that bad and totally not a bunch of creepy bastards! honest!" into perspective.

7231711 man, you must have really high standards if this is what you consider crap.

wlam #20 · May 20th, 2016 · · 4 ·

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Just like real dogs, Mistress Bitch's room was covered in her pussy musk and urine.

Truly, this is art.

7231744 better that a lot of sentences I've read. Also, when it comes to rape, or implied rape it shouldn't be erotic unless it's a fetish thing. Ever read "Last exit to Brooklyn"? That's how you write rape. Because actual rape is horrible and non-erotic.

wlam #22 · May 20th, 2016 · · 4 ·

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better that a lot of sentences I've read.

And you go around criticizing my standards...

7231764 Well, let's ignore the fact you ignored my main argument and focused on a small detail. Yes it is better than a lot of sentences I've read. For one, I could actually read it, it had no major typos, and is well structured. As a bonus it also gets across how horrible the situation is for the protagonist. Also, compared to other fics that get published, this is quite low on the scale of offence.

7231711 You realize you only see this in the features cause you turned the 'view mature' switch on right, so really it only puts into perspective what you want it to.

Additionally I hope to see more of this.

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Actually, there are quite a few reasons someone can see this particular story on fimfiction's front page; a disabled mature filter is but one.

wlam #26 · May 20th, 2016 · · 6 ·

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People really tend to forget about the fact that there are a lot of excellent M-rated stories here that aren't horrible fetish porn, too.

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No kink-shaming. It makes hypocrites of us all. Not one person with "View Mature" on is 100% vanilla (we are all clearly in these stories to see sapient feral creatures romance each other sweetly in a well-formed story or just get straight down to business). No one likes having their fetishes attacked (unless that itself is your fetish, I don't judge) so there's clearly no reason to do it to others.

It's fine to not like it, or be grossed out by it, or disagree with it. But there's never a good reason to actually give voice to it, especially in a place where it's going on - this story, for instance.

I don't settle into Spike-centric stories' comments and go on about how much I hate him. Or Luna-centric stories and talk about how much better Celestia is (anymore). Because doing that is clearly just going to rile people up, and is the only reason for doing so. Which is, at its heart, trolling - saying something for no reason other than you know it's going to screw with people or upset them.

Let us all be reasonable and sensible people. If the kink is not yours, flee and save your precious eyes. I do.

wlam #29 · May 20th, 2016 · · 10 ·

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My fetish is judging other people's fetishes. Don't kink-shame me, you square.

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Heavens! Well, go right ahead then! You jerk. :trollestia:

Point made, though.

I love it can't wait to see what you have in store next! :pinkiehappy:

Just like real dogs, Mistress Bitch's room was covered in her pussy musk and urine.

This line literally made my day.

7233160 Well hello there would you like some candy? I also have puppies at my home...

7231711 I'm more shocked that no one else is happy that Lulu is finally getting her own gimp and no one has even brought it up yet.:fluttercry:
This fandom does not make me sick the way I want it to!:flutterrage:

wlam #36 · May 21st, 2016 · · 2 ·

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I feel for you, Jeff. I really do. I hear down the grapevine that the cranial acid injections will be in the next chapter, though.

7233206 BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! you made my day

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The blanket is bobbing up and down.

*Puts fic on tracking and puts on ol waitin album*
It will happen soon enough. Soon enough.:moustache:

7233269 Fingers crossed, Hope it also includes severed heads in a fridge along with dismembered penises in boxes. :yay:

Wait, why is the chapter date tagged as 17th Dec 2015? I thought this story was new. All the comments are new. What's the deal?

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I know right.:trollestia:

This is an old draft. Posted to clean up my queue and everybody's gone bananas for it. I don't even write like this anymore. Of all my fics, this had to be the one. This had to be the one in the featurebox.

I just- Really guys. Really? I didn't make this happen. You did! You all did!

:moustache:

7235353 I guess the gimp gonna sleep for a little while more.
:applecry:

I have a feeling......that someone is going to become Luna's slave.

7231711
Humans as a whole are a bunch of creepy bastards.
GetOverIt.exe :twilightsmile:

I can't wait til the author continues this story...
:moustache:

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You unquestionably are, from what I've noticed of your comments on this site, but still, speak for yourself, dude.

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I am a wonderfully average example of humanity.
I try to be nice in general, but I am a total bastard to those who screw with me or the people I care about, and I feel like there's no one alive who can comprehend my sexual preference. :twilightsmile:
(P.S. You're one to talk. :trollestia: )

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Why do you two show up on nearly every story I favorite?

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Maybe the three of us just have good tastes...
:twilightsmile:

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