• Published 14th Jun 2015
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For Cranky - The Lunar Samurai



Cranky saved my life nearly a decade ago, and now I want to support him at his wedding, too bad it's at the center of ponyville.

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The Wedding

As I stood outside of Ponyville on that fateful day, I quickly began to realize how much of a predicament I had put myself in. The last time changelings had shown up in pony society undisguised was several years ago during the Canterlot invasion. We were only there for under an hour, but the hatred toward our kind still lingered after that brief encounter.

I could just make out the city through the dense trees of the Everfree. The edge of the forest stopped abruptly, giving way to rolling pastureland, a gentle river, and then to the town itself. The image of that place shocked me, in a way. I had always thought the great Ponyville, home to the Princess of Friendship, would be much more grand, but it was rather small.

Despite its size, I hesitated a while longer. I tried to tell myself that things were different after that time, but deep down, I knew that was a lie. My eyes filled with tears of fright. I couldn’t do it. It was too difficult. I turned back to the forest, that place that had given me shelter through the final stretch of my journey. It was safe, secure, and I knew that despite how wild it was, it accepted me as another animal in its midst.

For reasons I cannot comprehend, I looked back to the town once more. I knew that Cranky’s wedding was today. He had helped me so many years ago in that frozen pass and I was too afraid to partake in the happiest moment in his life. My gaze drifted to the forest, but it had changed. Instead of being welcoming, it was the symbol of my defeat.

You’ve come this far, I thought to myself as I turned to the city. He approached a changeling; you can attend his wedding.

I felt a power in my steps as I quickly walked into the cheery daylight of the pastureland. It was a welcome change from the eternally cloudy home that I had come from. I cantered toward the town, but my mind slowly began to regret my decision to attend the wedding. At first it was simple: there wasn’t a pony in sight, which meant that I could be myself with nothing to judge me for who I was. However, that feeling vanished as I rounded the top of one of the hills.

A shrill young scream arose from a filly pegasus who was picking flowers along the path. I nearly screamed as well, but I kept myself from adding fuel to the fire. She tried to take to the sky to flee from me, but apparently her wings were not developed enough to fly. I felt sorry for her as she tumbled to the ground in a heap. I started toward her with the intention of helping her back to her hooves, but she let loose another scream. I immediately froze, but my mind could not come up with a gesture that would keep her from panicking.

After nearly a minute of her terrified silence, I simply turned to the road and continued on my way. As I descended into the valley, I heard a hail of hoofsteps as another pony rushed to that filly.

The only thing I could make out from her frantic shouting was “Changeling” and “tell mayor mare.”

Great. Not five minutes in and I’ve already traumatized a young filly by simply walking. As I continued on, my mind busied itself with ways in which I could have changed the outcome of the situation. The phrase “If I had only” repeated itself dozens of times, but each outcome was the same, except the one where I returned to the Everfree. I knew I could have disguised myself and saved the city from my true nature, but cranky personally requested me to attend his wedding. I wanted to let him know that I supported him, and that meant no disguises.

“He came to you in your time of need, go to him in his time of joy,” was my anthem as I trotted toward the city. I was as determined as I was terrified.

The next time I encountered a pony was at the edge of the bridge that crossed the river.

“What are you doing here?” the stallion asked as he stepped into my path.

I took a moment to make a halfway decent response, but my mind couldn’t come up with anything more than “I’m here for cranky’s wedding.” Immediately, I regretted my words, as the stallion’s demeanor quickly switched from disapproval to hatred.

“Not on my watch,” he said as he put his nose up to mine and narrowed his eyes. “We don’t need any bugs stealing the love from their wedding.”

I retreated a few steps and reached into my saddlebag for the invitation I had received. “Cranky gave me an invitation.”

“And how do I know you didn’t steal it?” he asked as he swiped the page from my grasp.

“It’s addressed to me…” I whimpered. I tried to keep my voice as quiet as possible.

The stallion looked at the letter and back to me with scrutiny wrinkling his face. “My apologies,” he said in a rather unapologetic tone as he gave the invitation back to me.

I smiled and grabbed hold, but the stallion kept his grasp and pulled me close. “Don’t try anything funny.”

I swallowed my fear and nodded as I gently placed the wrinkled note into my bag. The decision to proceed into town was slowly starting to feel like a bad one.

As I walked into town, I was confronted by the reality that I wasn’t as vilified as I thought. The stallion at the bridge was far more confrontational than any other pony inside the town. Later I would discover that he was one of the town watches tasked with the job of keeping the riffraff out.

I tried to disappear, but hiding a black, pitted body amongst pastel ponies was no easy task. It quickly became apparent that I had an imaginary radius about me, one that kept ponies a comfortable distance from me. The stares, muttering, and fear were all as I had imagined, but luckily there wasn’t much confrontation.

It really does do something to your self esteem when you catch dozens of phrases in passing that float along the air.

‘Why is he here?’ was common along with ‘Mommy, what’s that?’ I tried my best to block out the comments, but some stung badly.

“Those bugs should be exterminated” was echoed in various forms, some with expletives thrown in for good measure. Our reputation as a species was so powerfully overbearing that it superseded anything I tried to do. I kept my mouth shut, for I knew even my voice was bound to anger somepony.

The wedding was being held at the town hall, and a large crowd had gathered at the entrance, but what caught me off guard was the other crowd that was careening through the air. At first, I assumed they were pegasi, but I quickly realized that they had been launched through the air on what seemed to be a DJ stand. I knew Ponyville had a reputation for being chaotic, but I had never expected to see such a spectacle. It was almost humorous, and I felt my mouth crack a small smile. The rest of the ponies began to file into the building, but I stuck to the shadows. If there was one thing I knew, it was that I needed to go in after the rest of the citizens were already seated inside. I didn’t want to scare off other attendees.

I waited for a minute to see if any other stragglers were coming. Just as I was about to leave my post and quietly slip into the back row, a brown stallion wearing a scarf raced to the door, had a quick discourse with a grey pony, and entered the building.

I took a deep breath, steeled myself, and quietly trotted to the deck of the town hall. This was it, the reason I came to this town. I quietly pushed the door open and ducked into the last row. I tried my best to keep my head forward and pay attention to the ceremony, but I could feel the stares of some of the ponies closest to me.

Just ignore them, I thought as mayor mare began her speech.

“But I also see so many ponies from all trots of life brought together by love. Cranky searched all across this great land of ours to find Matilda. And no matter what obstacles kept them apart, love’s what finally brings them together just as it has brought all of us together now. It’s remarkable to me how Cranky’s search for Matilda could fill this room with such a unique collection of ponies. It makes you realize that everypony is the star of their own story, and it’s not just the main characters in our stories that make life so rich. It’s everypony: those who play big parts and those who play small. If it weren't for everypony in this room, and many more who couldn’t be here today, Cranky and Matilda’s lives wouldn’t be as full and vibrant as they are.”

She continued with the ceremony, but something about that speech was comforting to me. Everypony here knew Cranky, even the giant weeping sea monster who could only attend by putting his head through a window. It was a great reminder that we were all parts to his story, and I had been one of them.

The two kissed, and the reception began, but I knew I couldn’t attend that. It was too much for ponies and changelings to mix to that degree, but I was okay with forgoing the buffet. Maybe one day we would live together, but today was not that day. As the group followed Cranky into the reception, I stayed in my seat. It had been a long time since I had felt so welcome somewhere, and I guess I was just trying to milk that feeling for as long as I could.

I must have remained there for several minutes, because as I shook my head out of its daydream, I realized that the entire room was desolate. It was time for me to go, probably without Cranky even knowing I was here, but I had done what I could. I slid off of my chair and walked toward the door.

“You?” a familiar voice rang as I place my hoof on the door.

“Cranky?” I asked as I turned toward the stage once more. There, standing at the other end of the chairs, was Cranky.

“You came,” he said with a smile as he approached me.

“You helped me, so I wanted to be here to support you.”

“Well, that’s awful kind of you. Say, do you want to join the reception?”

I sighed and shook my head. “I would, but it’s rare for ponies to see past my exterior. This town doesn’t appreciate my kind, and I’d rather not cause a scene at your wedding.”

“I-I understand.” I could tell he was slightly crestfallen. “But I’m glad you came.”

I smiled. “I am too. Now go, you have a bride to dance with.”

“Thanks,” he said as he turned to me.

“Likewise.”

I stepped out into the evening air and quickly cantered out of the city. It was much easier to leave than it was to enter. I had come with a purpose and I had fulfilled it; that was enough to put a smile on my face. As I walked back over the bridge, I realized how much happier I was. The city had been intimidating, but I had seen the donkey who had saved my life at his happiest.

The sun was just setting before I stepped back into the Everfree. I turned to the city once more and smiled. “Thanks for the invitation: I really enjoyed it.”

Comments ( 110 )

Wow, I've never had a story dedicated to me before. Weird feeling. Regardless, I enjoyed! Despite it's short length, you did a pretty good job on capturing the struggle he would face going to a town fulled with ponies that would be terrified of him, and the thermal it would cause him. Both internally and externally.

Side note, ponies are speciesist.

6089212 Thanks for the feedback and for challenging me to write it! I had a lot of fun with this one!

Good story, especially on such short notice.

Personally, I kind of prefer the idea that it's only the children that raise much fuss about a changeling, kind of like how it was the children that raised more fuss about Twilight being a princess in Twilight Time, but I guess that's more idealistic, and not as dramatic for a story.

It's so cool that this fandom inspires so much creativity so quickly though.

6089337 It's amazing what you can pull off if you're encouraged. :pinkiehappy:

6090493 Thanks! Now if only it would pass moderation :twilightsheepish:

Not a bad story. Personally, while I can appreciate it does add for tension and drama to the story, I kinda like it how nopony really seemed to be bothered by the guy's presence at the wedding, save for some scared, immature foals. I mean, if ponies were as violently racist as some fics have them, I dunno, I think this guy would've been dead long before he even got to the town hall.

It does bring up a question why this guy, or really any changeling in general in so many fics, would be so scared of ponies. I mean, what does a changeling with fangs and shapeshifting powers have to fear from cowardly herbivore ponies who piss themselves and from bunny stampedes, zebras and foals with cutie pox? I know it's meant to draw sympathy for the character, but it's honestly hard to take being him threatened by ponies seriously. All he would have to do is hiss a bit and any pony with the balls to bother him would run for the hills.

On the other hand, it does curious me when and how Cranky saved this guy's life. My bad, re-checked and saw the mentioning of him saving him from freezing. Even so, him and Cranky having a history is still a good idea.

Good way to capture the feelings one has when they think that society does not need them, or that they think they are a burden to society. Just some small errors here and there (i read a few Crany's and some missed capitalizations). Liked and faved.

Nice story:pinkiehappy:

Do we also get the story about the rescue ?:scootangel:

6092532 If this one does well, absolutely!

My one gripe is the text wall. I prefer spaces betwixt ze passages. <.< But that's just my little nitpick.

6092629 Thanks for the input. I've done it this way for a while, but that doesn't mean I couldn't improve. I'll definitely take this into consideration for my next releases!

Cranky Doodle, the donkey that doesnt deny his friendhip to anypony/changueling/sea monster.

6093090 You're darn tootin! I'm going to write that followup story soon, I never thought this would get featured. :pinkiegasp:

6093141 "I remembered to wear a disguise right? Yeah, I totally did."

Despite his trepidation and fear, he did what he had to to honor his friend.
And your portrayal of his emotions was very well done.
Good story! :pinkiehappy:

6093161 Thanks! I really enjoy exploring complex emotions in my stories. And it seems to do quite well! I glad you liked it.

How do you know if a story is good? Well with this one it is real subtle, actually no it has 53 likes an 0 dislikes, when my story hit 53 likes i had about 5 dislikes, so... Well done good sir

This is just a really heartwarming story. It says a lot about this show that just one small scene can inspire brilliant fan fictions about it.

6093584 It kinda hit me while I was browsing reddit that this little guy's presence was a lot more convoluted than I initially thought. Why wasn't he there in a disguise? Why was he there at all? Why did the ponies not lynch him?

Then I drank a monster and this happened. :pinkiecrazy:

I am now convinced that the only reason the writers put that changeling in the show at all was to see how many fanfics of EVERY GENRE IMAGINABLE it would spawn.

I shall not fall for the trap!

The sun was just setting before I stepped back into the Everfree. I turned to the city once more and smiled. “Thanks for the invitation: I really enjoyed it.”

And once at the hive, he hears Chrysalis cackling maniacally... again... "NOW MY GRUBS, WE SHALL ATTACK PONYVILLE AND RULE EQUESTRIA!!!"

Sighing, he swiftly assassinates her and takes over, leading the changelings to a peaceful and mutually beneficial future with ponies.

Until the Sith showed up... but I blew up that crossover last week. :trollestia:

6093742 I fell for it hook line and sinker. I wrote 2. :I

6093645 That is true, however, the visual gag was amusing enough that I don't mind it so much.

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Why wasn't he there in a disguise? Why was he there at all? Why did the ponies not lynch him?

Of course, I mean, all sorts of questions must've arisen when seeing that lone changeling attending the wedding. I can only bet the writers were laughing to themselves, knowing that a watershed of fics were about to be unleashed, given the intense amount of ambiguity of those few seconds of the changeling on screen.

I mean, my best guess why he was there at all was an acknowledgement by the writers of the changelings' existence and popularity, especially given how it was a background character episode. But if we're going from a storytelling perspective, well, if there's no qualms about him being there aside from a few scared and immature foals, then it would strongly suggest that aside from him being invited that the ponies of the show canon aren't the murderously violent hyper-racists so many fanfics make them out to be.

It's a shame because it's that trope that prevents me a lot of the time from liking otherwise pretty good fics. If I were able to get around the idea of the ponies like that maybe it wouldn't bother me so much. But as is... eh. Again, it's not at all a bad story you got here. It's actually pretty heartfelt and with how you tied the changeling to Cranky and his past exploits. It's just... bah, my own problems.

6093756 I have a tendency to ask those kinds of questions. I guess that's one of the reasons I write. :twilightsmile:

6093769 Oh yeah, totally. I don't think the writers came up with the complete backstory for this little guy, but that's where I find so much entertainment. I write so I can find out about who he really is, and this guy is definitely out of the ordinary. I think he's really cool, and I absolutely loved writing about him. It's why I write, because I have a chance to enter a world and then to share it with you guys!

I mean, my best guess why he was there at all was an acknowledgement by the writers of the changelings' existence and popularity, especially given how it was a background character episode.

That's my conclusion, since we don't have any other information and the episode was pretty much tossing everything possible in at the end, cast-wise.

But if we're going from a storytelling perspective, well, if there's no qualms about him being there aside from a few scared and immature foals, then it would strongly suggest that aside from him being invited that the ponies of the show canon aren't the murderously violent hyper-racists so many fanfics make them out to be.

Well, there are other possibilities: a) nopony else had turned around to see it yet since they're focused on Cranky and Matilda. b) it's a really stupid changeling and forgot to get a disguise. c) it had a disguise of a pony who was invited but lost it for reasons, or d) whatever other thing somebody can make up

But I do agree that many fanfics are ruined by proposing that the canon ponies go on murderous rampages. Hell, they won't even deliberately kill monsters that invade their town. They're about as vicious as TIbetan monks, SRSLY. :rainbowlaugh:

6092532 I said if this story did well that I would do a prequel detailing the changeling's rescue. Well... it did well, so it looks like I'm going to stick with these two for a while longer.

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That's the thing about this episode. I think it's the writers' way of telling us that they love our fics and that they want us to keep writing them. It acknowledged fan theories, introduced a few new characters, and provided more hooks than an outdoor sport's store. Not only have they not tried to deter us from getting creative with their narrative as so many others are wont to do, they've actually catalyzed our creativity.

Actually, in a sense, it was a reverse-fanfic. The source show wrote an episode that heavily borrowed and implemented elements from popular fan fiction and theories, whereas normally the fans write stories and theories about a given source show. So there's something to think about.

6094244 Absolutely! Along that same vein, it tied in several hundred characters to Cranky, opening up a huge new door for writers to tie cranky into their stories and give him extreme depth. I mean, he knew steven magnet, the princesses (all of them) a changeling, and countless more. It's really interesting to see that this seemingly random donkey has such deep connections.

Sonder, man. It's a powerful thing.

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They all but stated that Cranky's search for Matilda effectively turned him into an adventurer (it would have been reasonable to believe with his initial episode, but now it's practically undeniable). Can you say Fan Fiction Fodder?

And yeah, I think about stuff like that all the time. I often imagine what it'd be like if there was an invisible camera following me and that in some other dimension, some race of beings are watching a TV show that is my life. But sometimes, I'll be sitting in a restaurant, and a woman will pass by, and I'll think that maybe there's an invisible camera following her, and when her TV show's credits roll, I'm just "hairy man in restaurant."

Our whole world is connected in ways we'll never fully understand. I believe that all forms of artistry, from painting, to writing, music, and dance, is our way of dealing with it. Art draws people together, and it becomes points of convergence for our collective stories. Science and technology may be what we need to improve our survival, but it's art that improves our lives.

I wrote a review of this story, which you can read here.

:pinkiegasp: Are you Doomies brother !

:facehoof: Do...you?*
:pinkiehappy: Doomie!
:moustache: Do wut?

:duck: Do me.
:moustache: Sure!

* Do...you? another fine fic.

6094439 Doomie? Do you mean DoomedCivillian?

I fear him like a king. :rainbowderp:

6094491 another changling story here on fimfiction ,Do...you? Pinkie falls for the bug .....:pinkiehappy:

Guess what, +1 follower.

Just as a canonical note- when asked, Larson's said that the changeling is a friend of Matilda's.

(Which does nothing to how much fun this story is.)

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:moustache: "Shut the fuck up, Twilight."

6093769 In the end we're allowed to believe whatever we want, and that's the positive thing about the changelings... and that's what matters in the end. If it leads to a good story that is all we need.

6094856 He was Matildas friend

6093780 That's a good enough reason for anyone to pick up a pen, or a keyboard, in this case.

6094724 Sweet! I hope you like my work in the future!:twilightsmile:

I like this because bugpone did what he had to even though ponies are a bunch of xenophobic jerks. (and Plounge)

6095354 Plounge is best reason. All praise Doomie, our lord protectorate.

6094792 Both of the top spots on fimfiction have the same focus right now. There's an entire group dedicated to this little guy.

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